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The Black Hole

May 14, 2010
By Aquafina BRONZE, Lynn Haven, Florida
Aquafina BRONZE, Lynn Haven, Florida
3 articles 16 photos 23 comments

Favorite Quote:
And yet, to say the truth, love and reason rarely keep company now-a-days

It was supposed to be a game but the reality of it all slammed upon.
Before, I promised myself this would not happen again.
I knew it could only lead to worse pain.
He sucked me into his black hole in which he called his heart suffocating me.
At first I wanted to crawl out even if it left me bleeding.
I had no choice though to succumb to his warmth.
He's tried to teach me not to be afraid.
He doesnt understand though, that I cant possibly open my heart again when ive been hurt so much before.
I am afraid...

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This article has 6 comments.

katie-cat GOLD said...
on Jun. 2 2010 at 2:29 pm
katie-cat GOLD, McClellandtown, Pennsylvania
13 articles 0 photos 163 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Look after my heart, I've left it with you."- Edward Cullen
"To love another person is to see the face of God . . ."- Les Miserables
"Don't say the old lady screamed. Bring her out and let her scream." - Mark Twain

This is pretty good.  Slightly scary, but in a suspenseful exciting way.  I'd like to hear more, though.  Good job! :)

on May. 30 2010 at 1:56 pm
MyConstRuctd_IdentiTy SILVER, Chardon, Ohio
7 articles 56 photos 356 comments

Favorite Quote:
"One heartbeat."

"Our scars remind us of where we've been; they don't dictate where we're going."
-SSA David Rossi, Criminal Minds

Compared to some of my short stuff like this( I haven't posted them yet, so you won't find anything of what I'm talking about), this is AWESOME! I wouldn't have had the mind enough to make this. XD It's AWESOME! XDD

on May. 29 2010 at 4:37 pm
AlexandraVasari PLATINUM, Fort Stewart, Georgia
28 articles 4 photos 174 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Writing songs is super intimate. It's a bit like getting naked"~ Gwen Stefani

This is pretty interesting!:) Could you check out some of my stuff?:)

on May. 29 2010 at 4:19 pm
SarClark BRONZE, NC, Connecticut
2 articles 0 photos 534 comments
I agree with Katelyn (Redhead) and I'm sad this is true. However, it's very brilliantly worded and strongly touching. There are some grammar mistakes, granted, but I liked reading it.

on May. 29 2010 at 8:55 am
HeatherBee BRONZE, I Live In, Texas
1 article 0 photos 1979 comments

Favorite Quote:
Go on and try to tear me down. I will be rising from the ground, like a skyscraper

Love is louder than the pressure to be perfect

yuppers, i find this interesting!! :)) i really liked it!! it made me think

on May. 29 2010 at 5:31 am
once_a_redhead SILVER, Lady Lake, Florida
9 articles 0 photos 114 comments

Favorite Quote:
"love is somethin' we all feel even if we don't know that we do!!"

interesting!!! i like it though i think u could have draged it out a lil more it seems kinda rushed but other than that good work!!!