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A Night Spent Stargazing

August 6, 2010
By Thesilentraven PLATINUM, Mableton, Georgia
Thesilentraven PLATINUM, Mableton, Georgia
40 articles 2 photos 1632 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;il piu nell&#039; uno,&quot; (according to Emerson, an Italian expression for beauty)<br /> <br /> &quot;Unable are the loved to die, for love is immortality&quot; ~Emily Dickinson<br /> <br /> &quot;The deeper that sorrow carves into your being, the more joy you can contain&quot; <br /> ~Kahlil Gibran


I looked out my window late one evening, only to behold the largest and roundest moon that I had ever seen. Entranced by its beauty, I followed it out of my house and into the beginnings of nightfall. Out on my driveway, I laid myself upon the ground, the better to view the celestial scene which stretched far above me.

The sky was unbelievably clear. It was lit with myriads of tiny lights, which shone brightly between the deepest depths of darkness. I felt like I could see, with my eager eyes, every star that burned in the universe. It was easily the most beautiful sight that I had seen in nature for a long time. The stars were sprinkled, carelessly yet intricately, across the heavens. The moon was like the proud mother of them all, fixed resolutely in her place in the sky.

Suddenly, all of the stress that I had been carrying in my mind disappeared. I think there’s something about spending your solitude in a place of breathtaking beauty that seems to clear the blemishes from your troubled spirit. All my worries were melted away by a newfound feeling that was burning in my heart. I was witnessing something angelic, a miracle. An onlooker of something deeply great, who was I to bother with the trivial worries of my social life on the earth?

I spent many hours under the sky, awestruck. The street that runs beside my house was golden, lit only by a single lamppost. The houses were bathed in darkness. My mind was filled with great thoughts. My senses were sharpened; and I relished the chilly air, the rough asphalt, and the symphony of night. I could barely tear my eyes off of the moon, which was slowly and gracefully making its great journey across the sky. When I stumbled inside my house that night, I’ll bet my family saw something strange but vibrant in my eyes.

It is essential for all of us, as humans, to see things like this. This is what gives life its essence. I have never been the same person since that night, because something from somewhere visited me and left a vivid mark upon my soul. We must spend time in seclusion like this, regarding the greatness of a God given world. We must reflect upon ourselves and our lives, so that we may be possessed by something as great as what I saw in the sky that wonderful night.



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on Sep. 8 2010 at 10:53 pm
DreamWriter17 PLATINUM, Marengo, Indiana
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Favorite Quote:
learn from your past to live for the future.

Haha, you're welcome.  People always think it's weird when you say, "Oh, oh!  Look at the sky!!" [turns head] "What?" "...the clouds, can't you see them?" "Oh..........sure...." [backs away slowly] Haha, weirdos.

on Sep. 7 2010 at 8:27 pm
Thesilentraven PLATINUM, Mableton, Georgia
40 articles 2 photos 1632 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;il piu nell&#039; uno,&quot; (according to Emerson, an Italian expression for beauty)<br /> <br /> &quot;Unable are the loved to die, for love is immortality&quot; ~Emily Dickinson<br /> <br /> &quot;The deeper that sorrow carves into your being, the more joy you can contain&quot; <br /> ~Kahlil Gibran

I'm glad that you have the... er, I don't know the word... to look at the stars at night. I think the world would be a better place if we just looked at the stars and sunsets! Thanks for commenting.

on Sep. 7 2010 at 12:02 am
DreamWriter17 PLATINUM, Marengo, Indiana
34 articles 1 photo 682 comments

Favorite Quote:
learn from your past to live for the future.

Beautiful.  Enough said.  Well, I guess not, haha.  I love looking at the stars on clear nights, and so I think I can understand, only partially, mind you, where you are coming from with this.  The way it was written related to me because it made how you felt so clear.  It is beautiful.  Like I said. ;-)

on Aug. 23 2010 at 8:38 pm
Thesilentraven PLATINUM, Mableton, Georgia
40 articles 2 photos 1632 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;il piu nell&#039; uno,&quot; (according to Emerson, an Italian expression for beauty)<br /> <br /> &quot;Unable are the loved to die, for love is immortality&quot; ~Emily Dickinson<br /> <br /> &quot;The deeper that sorrow carves into your being, the more joy you can contain&quot; <br /> ~Kahlil Gibran

Thank you very much! I was in an uncharacteristic bout of passion when I wrote this, so it seems like the author is foreign to me. But I appreciate your taking the time to comment.

on Aug. 22 2010 at 9:35 am
thebushhippie PLATINUM, Sandown, New Hampshire
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Leave behind your own footprints! :0)

Hi! You commented on my story, 'Stargazing' and you mentioned your memoir, so I thought I'd come and check it out. Amazing job! I can so picture what the sky looked like in mind mind after reading this. Awesome descriptions of how you felt on that night. Loved it!

on Aug. 13 2010 at 3:18 pm
Thesilentraven PLATINUM, Mableton, Georgia
40 articles 2 photos 1632 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;il piu nell&#039; uno,&quot; (according to Emerson, an Italian expression for beauty)<br /> <br /> &quot;Unable are the loved to die, for love is immortality&quot; ~Emily Dickinson<br /> <br /> &quot;The deeper that sorrow carves into your being, the more joy you can contain&quot; <br /> ~Kahlil Gibran

Thank you very much, both for the comment and the compliment.

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on Aug. 12 2010 at 8:53 pm
mmoran BRONZE, Lakehills, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;What is a weed? A plant whose true virtues have not yet been discovered.&quot; -Ralph Waldo Emerson

This reminds me of something I would write, of couse, therefore I love it. :)