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Matchmaker's Mansion

May 28, 2011
By Hope_Princess BRONZE, Hebron, New Hampshire
Hope_Princess BRONZE, Hebron, New Hampshire
4 articles 4 photos 376 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Hope sees the invisible, feels the intangible, and achieves the impossible."


When Asha takes her first step inside the Matchmaker’s Mansion she had intended to find someone to take the place of her ex-boyfriend that had broken her heart…
But instead she was thrown into the arms of the mysterious Shay who makes her promise never to love him.
It all started with the first question of the Matchmaker’s Quiz: “Would you be willing to die for the person you loved?”
What will her answer be?


Matchmaker's Mansion

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Meg777 GOLD said...
on Mar. 2 2013 at 11:58 pm
Meg777 GOLD, Shrewsbury, Massachusetts
11 articles 7 photos 5 comments

Favorite Quote:
"life is not measured by the number of breaths we take but by the number of moments that take our breathe away"

Amazing!!! It is such a great story I couldn't stop reading it! Please keep writing!

Ressy said...
on Feb. 28 2013 at 5:06 am
Hi, the story is very interesting... is this the end or is there any other parts yet to come?? 

on Feb. 26 2013 at 4:36 pm
Hope_Princess BRONZE, Hebron, New Hampshire
4 articles 4 photos 376 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Hope sees the invisible, feels the intangible, and achieves the impossible."

Haha! No, you're absolutely right about the anime/manga plot. I started writing this right after I finished one of my favorite shows. Needless to say, it definitely influenced my writing. ;-) But if my story holds an addictive characteristic then I think I did a pretty good job of following in the footsteps of anime tv shows, right?

on Feb. 24 2013 at 10:06 pm
KuuMatsuri BRONZE, San Diego, California
1 article 0 photos 3 comments

Favorite Quote:
"We are each angels with only one wing, and we can only fly by embracing one another."

OH.MY.GOODNESS....I fell in love with ths story! T^T Please continue it, please, please! Also, I kinda noticed a lot of elements in this story are very similar to the cliches of anime/manga plots. Sorry, I may be wrong, but I'm such a huge fan of Japanese anime, and I couldnt help but notice!

naila love said...
on Feb. 20 2013 at 3:26 pm
please update yhe story it isss truly addicting .it is lovely

LuvLife said...
on Feb. 19 2013 at 1:45 pm
LuvLife, Sydney, California
0 articles 0 photos 10 comments

Favorite Quote:
Live the life you love, love the life you live!:)

I asking, no begging! For you to write the next chapter! I ❤ it so far, and your doing an AMAZING job. I reeeeaaalllllyyyy hope you can create the next 1-2chapters or so? I know it is too much to ask....but please? P.s: thx soo much! You've encouraged me to start writing again! Oh and I'm team Shay too

Meli123 said...
on Feb. 17 2013 at 11:50 pm
Wow! You are a stupendous writer! I'm asking you to PLEASE write the next few chapters!!!! I REALLY want to know what happens next! So far you are doing an AWESOME job;) I just hope you can take sometime to write the next few chapters! P.S. Im totally team Shay too(^∇^)

on Feb. 16 2013 at 5:57 pm
AngelPromises, Cupertino, California
0 articles 0 photos 5 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Love is a force more formidable than any other. It is invisible - it cannot be seen or measured, yet it is powerful enough to transform you in a moment, and offer you more joy than any material possession could."
-Barbara de Angelis

this is the most addicting thing ever!! its kind of the like the book Forbidden I NEED the next chapter

on Feb. 15 2013 at 11:04 am
this is a really great book. I want to find out more.about this book. 

greatwriter said...
on Feb. 8 2013 at 10:39 pm
greatwriter, Chicago, Illinois
0 articles 0 photos 12 comments

Favorite Quote:
Why fit in when you were born to STAND OUT.

Now I know what it means to be hooked. Please write more

woz11 said...
on Jan. 29 2013 at 2:51 pm
hey this story is amazing  please post some more up we've been waiting months... :( i really wanna know what happens! :) 

ShyKarma GOLD said...
on Jan. 25 2013 at 11:49 pm
ShyKarma GOLD, Sedro Woolley, Washington
10 articles 10 photos 28 comments

Favorite Quote:
when your in jail a good friend will be trying to bail you out. A best friend will be in the cell next to yours saying "Damn that was fun" - groucho marx

Please write more i need to know what happens next Please update soon

lovedove said...
on Jan. 12 2013 at 12:27 am
I love this so much!! You have to take this to a publisher!! I will read all of your books if you publish them!! I am officially a dedicated fan of yours :)

Nani22 SILVER said...
on Jan. 11 2013 at 10:17 pm
Nani22 SILVER, Jonestown, Pennsylvania
7 articles 0 photos 10 comments

Favorite Quote:
In the movie the Avengers
-(Thor) Loki is beyond reason. But he is of Asgard and he is my brother.
-(Black Widow) He killed 80 people in 2 days.
-(Thor)... He's adopted... ;-)

Please please please please please please please write more! I'm dying here! You are absolutely amazing and I am completely hooked. I can't wait to see what happens next! I want to know who was who in the beginning when she had the kissing stage. Btw... I'm Team Shay all the way =-)

on Jan. 11 2013 at 9:46 pm
yummycupcakes11, New York, New York
0 articles 0 photos 1 comment
please give me the chapters! I wanna know if asha chooses shay! hae the cutes out of them all!

Danise said...
on Jan. 5 2013 at 6:18 am
Danise, Pangasinan, Ohio
0 articles 0 photos 3 comments
Hi! Can't wait for the next chapters! Hope you'll update them soon! Thankyou! :* :)

Danise said...
on Jan. 4 2013 at 9:45 am
Danise, Pangasinan, Ohio
0 articles 0 photos 3 comments
Omg!!! I'm falling inlove with you story!! Thumbs up for you! You're a great writer. Keep it up!    PS. I;m hoping you're going to make us (the readers) really fall inlove with you story. ♥ GODBLESS! :)

on Jan. 1 2013 at 12:46 pm
Omg that was amazing but I thought it would be chase in the end.

on Dec. 22 2012 at 12:17 pm
farah9723 BRONZE, Beirut, Other
1 article 0 photos 23 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Forget The Past~Protect The Present~Predict The Future!!.."

Oh my goooodddd I just spent a whole hour reading this and I have to say u r just soooo freaking amazing :o ...I LOVE IT SO MUCH and I'm really hoping for chapter 27 and 28 to come out cz I wanna knw what happens !!! :)

on Dec. 20 2012 at 9:51 am
Love_Jesus18 SILVER, Killeen, Texas
8 articles 0 photos 10 comments
I agree with Twilightgirl97 on that GOD has blessed you with a great gift and you are using it to bless everyone that is on this website and i think if you make it into a book you will reach more people and you will receive more than 195 comments on your book. People will want to read your book and they will want more just like the rest of us on this website...