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The Five

January 15, 2012
By BreakingInside BRONZE, Pinson, Alabama
BreakingInside BRONZE, Pinson, Alabama
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We finally stopped walking. "Take it off." They all said in unison. I obeyed and when I took the blind fold off there stood Brett. I gasped. Shocked to even see him. Since The 5 did all of their work from England. "Hey Citric." He said with a smile. "Brett!" I ran over to him tears now falling and I was not sure why. He hugged me as tight as he could without hurting me. He was a foot taller than me. I was only 5'5, while he 6'6. "What are you doing here?" I looked up at him still in shock he was even standing there.
"Well, how do I explain this." I looked at him confused now so did my friends. Another person cleared their throat. A guy stepped forward from behind Brett. I recognized him immediately. Lance Cross. He had blue black hair that fell to his shirt collar. His eyes were a piercing emerald green just like mine. "Why is he here?" Brianna spoke up. "I don't remember inviting him." Caitlyn said a little harsh. Had they known each other? Luke studied him. "Hi Citric. I'm here to see you." I looked at him and laughed. "Me?" I stopped laughing when I realized both my brother and Lance weren't laughing along. Brett spoke again, “We need you to help us."

Abby R.

The Five

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on Jan. 19 2012 at 3:53 pm
BreakingInside BRONZE, Pinson, Alabama
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OMG this means sooooo much to me!:)) Thanks! Im still not finshed. Haha. I hope to finish one day but with my friend daring me to make a book out of it that might take awhile:))

on Jan. 19 2012 at 3:49 pm
Twisted_Kid BRONZE, Kansas City, Missouri
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Favorite Quote:
If you get something you not looking for its your fate. A fate that you made, fate is always changing everything you do turns your fate around. Nothing is not ment to be so be careful. {KARL}

i like this, you did pretty good. A moment i wish i could have