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My Tears Are Deadly

May 1, 2009
By madegclover6 SILVER, Van Nuys, California
madegclover6 SILVER, Van Nuys, California
6 articles 1 photo 10 comments

Favorite Quote:
idk i have alot


Broken,confused,battered and bruised
Heartbroken and torn thrown away and misused thrown against a wall you watch me as i fall crying silently screaming so loud my tears are deadly my blood so cold frozen and speechless is my feelings that run deep. no one understands how it is to be me.


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Seth1 BRONZE said...
on May. 12 2009 at 1:32 am
Seth1 BRONZE, Republic, Missouri
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Don't really have any.

this is really good!

please check my work!

especially all of those who have read this.

breezer11 GOLD said...
on May. 11 2009 at 8:19 pm
breezer11 GOLD, Cinci, Ohio
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your amazing please write more, and rate my work (im not good at writing)

Diesel SILVER said...
on May. 11 2009 at 7:01 pm
Diesel SILVER, West Hartford, Connecticut
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Wow! What a way to experiment with improper grammar and free verse. Very powerful.

Care to check out mine?

Danley GOLD said...
on May. 11 2009 at 4:30 pm
Danley GOLD, Boise, Idaho
16 articles 2 photos 2 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I solemnly swear that I am up to no good"

thats absolutely amazing i love it

Natasha2457 said...
on May. 10 2009 at 3:20 am
Dang ! Yu Mad Good !

on May. 10 2009 at 1:13 am
nxexnxaxj BRONZE, Leominster, Massachusetts
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i think dis is rlly good =]

on May. 9 2009 at 1:15 am
blackamethyst GOLD, Centerville, Ohio
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deep and insightful... keep writing