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The Wind Whispers

May 3, 2009
By -xlimitless239x- GOLD, Vanceboro, North Carolina
-xlimitless239x- GOLD, Vanceboro, North Carolina
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If you listen closely
You might hear it whisper my tale
You’ll hear it loud and clear
During a gale

I hear her whisper
“he has lost to heart
to a woman who doesn’t care
if you cut him up and look
you won’t find it there
she took his heart
tore it apart
she fell in love with one of his friends
and now, my tale shall end”

if you heard it
then keep it a secret
I have to pretend
That I don’t care
But she knows
When I look into her
Beautiful eyes
That she has hurt me

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carijoy SILVER said...
on Aug. 22 2009 at 6:49 am
carijoy SILVER, Phoenix, Arizona
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Wow, this is an amazing poem! So much emotion, and tells a great story without actually "telling it", as poems are supposed to. I can't wait to read more from you!

on May. 15 2009 at 6:59 pm
anninicole2 BRONZE, Roscoe, Illinois
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Aww i like it but its sad... thanks for the comment I printed out and saved it. I just put a new poem in there It will be a while before its posted but soon you will see it