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Death Overcomes Her

May 5, 2009
By luvinfrogs GOLD, Thousand Oaks, California
luvinfrogs GOLD, Thousand Oaks, California
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Death Overcomes Her
It is too bad you could not stay though you were a good friend
You were just a chickadee taken for the best
If god needs you now then join his nest
I will cry and cry every day that goes by
I will never forget the good example that you have set
How could you have gone and left me now
Every day I wonder how oh how
Had I not been sweet to you
I thought that I was really true
Since you are gone I will have to suffer
Death does overcome her.

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on Jan. 26 2010 at 12:59 pm
Secret_Love_Tells GOLD, Harrisonburg, Virginia
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Favorite Quote:
"I love you more than the sun loves the sky and the moon loves the stars" --my best friend
"Do it for love." --sark
"One does not succeed in never falling but in getting back up evertime they do so."- Confucius

I really like this poem. It has nice flow and great comparisons.