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i love you

May 7, 2009
By ScreamingOutLoud GOLD, Cumberland, Rhode Island
ScreamingOutLoud GOLD, Cumberland, Rhode Island
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I know you can see through my lies
the truth is hidden behind the sorrow in my eyes
it stifles all my pleading cries
so i put on my smile while the trail of tears dries
but i've got somthing to say before all the decency in me dies
for the first time baby in a long time baby
this is the truth
i love you
i long for your kiss
and for the warmth of your embrace
when you arms surround be
it's more than i can take
it's the one thing in my life that actually seems real.

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on May. 20 2009 at 9:50 pm
Inkspired PLATINUM, Whitby, Other
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Favorite Quote:
"If one will scoff at the study of language, how, save in terms of language, will one scoff?" - Mario Pei
"I write for the same reason I breathe - because if I didn't, I would die." Isaac Asimov

I love this, but I think that the line "For the first time, baby, in a long time, baby" shouldn't have both "baby"s. Other than that, it's a wonderful poem!

Katie[: GOLD said...
on May. 15 2009 at 1:08 pm
Katie[: GOLD, Columbus, Indiana
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Favorite Quote:
"Live life to the fullest, and like there won't be a tomorrow."

really good