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Your Eyes

May 10, 2009
By vamppoet16 SILVER, Hayden, Alabama
vamppoet16 SILVER, Hayden, Alabama
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Favorite Quote:
"If i tell you I love you, can I keep you forever?"

Your Eyes trap me in silence
holding me there as a prisoner
they know that i can't fight it
So they go for my weakest spot
Your eyes are tunnels
never ending and pitch black
curving in mystery and narrowing into deception
they hint little but give nothing
Your eyes are inviting
the color of the sky before the storm
Beautiful, coloring, but very, very dangerous
the danger, though, you can't see until it's too late
Your eyes say " Come forward "
But i back up
Because knowing what i know
It's better to look away from Your eyes

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on Oct. 9 2009 at 11:02 am
jennee21_ann GOLD, Helper, Utah
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Favorite Quote:
"Don't gain the world and lose your soul....wisdom is better than silver or gold."

"You can always close a book, but you can never close the mind of a writer."

wow this is very good! :) while i was reading it, i was almost put into a trance. i love how deep and meaningful it is :) i love it!! :) check out some of my work if you can, i would love your opinion :) keep writing my friend...5 stars!

on May. 19 2009 at 11:00 pm
kmpoetgirl7 PLATINUM, Phillips, Wisconsin
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Favorite Quote:
"You must be in control of the authorship of your own destiny. The pen that writes your life story must be held in your own hand." Irene C. Kassorla

i loved your poem!! Thank you so much for commenting on mine step by step. :) Great work!