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Don't You Know

May 12, 2009
By BreeLynne27 GOLD, Carmel, Indiana
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Don't you know that when you make mistakes it's my heart that breaks?

Your grip is so strong, so tight, so suffocating, that I'm drowning in you.

Trying to break free,
But these thoughts of you still swim in my head.

Haunting me,
Like tragedy,
Like the colors,
The tears,
That you shed.

© Carollynn G., Hawthorne, NY

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LoveLikeWoe DIAMOND said...
on Jan. 17 2010 at 10:51 pm
LoveLikeWoe DIAMOND, LeSueur, MN, Minnesota
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i love this. it's amazing. You practically wrote exactly what i'm feeling right now. This is amazing. five stars.