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Utopia

March 6, 2021
By Mariamahmed24 BRONZE, Macon, Georgia
Mariamahmed24 BRONZE, Macon, Georgia
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Perspective 1:

It’s the perfect place                                    

Just right where you want to be

It’s right under your feet  


Not a problem for miles

With everything accustomed

Every day could be new


Your dreams come in spirit

But it is your utopia after all

You live a euphoria


Far wide you may go

You are not to be held back

For many laws don’t linger

It is all really up to you

 


Perspective 2:

Be careful what you wish

A utopia is hopeless

It’s unrealistic 


Too perfect is corrupt

Where do you really want to be?

Problems lie beneath


Your dreams come to life

They are too fabricated 

Euphoria like illusion


Don’t travel too far

Hold yourself from temptation

For your laws are vita

But all is really up to you


The author's comments:

I initially thought of writing a poem about a utopia because it is one of my favorite words. It’s anything you want it to be, and escape from reality. It’s very convenient for me to shun the world for a moment. Utopia has a lot to it and you can do a lot with it. It’s a “perfect” (hehe) topic to write about. Having two different perspectives of one can create a whole story. I wrote Utopia in Sedoka because there is a possibility to have two completely different perspectives on something that is considered so perfect or good and happy. All people are different, and so are their thoughts and ideas. Comparing two sides of a story holds a lot of mystery and vision.


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