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Too Much Pain

June 2, 2009
By stephiigiirl BRONZE, Fort Smith, Arkansas
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stephiigiirl BRONZE, Fort Smith, Arkansas
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Favorite Quote:
Two roads diverged in a wood and I - I took the one less travelled by, And that has made all the difference.<br /> - Robert Frost <br /> <br /> Beauty is unbearable, drives us to despair, offering us for a minute the glimpse of an eternity that we should like to stretch out over the whole of time.<br /> - Albert Camus

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Whenever I see, or think, or feel
I can never know if it's all real.
Was it a dream?
Maybe a lie?
I hope not.
If so, I may cry!
That one little night
Han an impact on my life.
When I dream,
It all comes back.
We'd make an amazing team.
HA! I can almost laugh.
It's all a lie.
Everything.
But why?
You got what you wanted
and then you left.
I feel so taunted-
Haunted, hurt, broken beyond relief-
Never again will a believe.
All this pain....?
What's it worth?
Nothing.
The tears fall like rain.
I'm done trying, I give up.
I'm dead inside, I'm all dried up

© Edgard B., Coral Springs, FL

The author's comments:
for the people who have had a broken heart or have been used... i feel you and this goes to all the girls who have felt this pain... even the guys
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stephiigiirl BRONZE said...
on Aug. 6 2010 at 3:10 pm
stephiigiirl BRONZE, Fort Smith, Arkansas
4 articles 1 photo 4 comments

Favorite Quote:
Two roads diverged in a wood and I - I took the one less travelled by, And that has made all the difference.<br /> - Robert Frost <br /> <br /> Beauty is unbearable, drives us to despair, offering us for a minute the glimpse of an eternity that we should like to stretch out over the whole of time.<br /> - Albert Camus

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thank you sosossoomuch.
bluemagnet22 PLATINUM said...
on Jul. 27 2010 at 9:54 pm
bluemagnet22 PLATINUM, Dearborn Hts, Michigan
24 articles 16 photos 644 comments

Favorite Quote:
You were born an origanal why die a copy?The secret to success is the consistency to pursue.To the world you may be one person,but to one person you may be the world.To receive the right answer,you must ask the right question.Don&#039;t worry be happy! :)

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Wow you can really feel ur emotion pouring from each line...great work!
wild18 SILVER said...
on Jul. 25 2010 at 9:39 pm
wild18 SILVER, Tampa, Florida
7 articles 0 photos 49 comments

Favorite Quote:
Forget about the people in your past theres a reason they didn&#039;t make it to your future.

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Gurl, i totally understand you. I loved this; you really spoke to me <3