Darkness | Teen Ink


June 8, 2009
By Amanda Bragg BRONZE, Proctorville, Ohio
Amanda Bragg BRONZE, Proctorville, Ohio
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Sometimes I feel like I am underwater with bricks tied to my feet.
I'm struggling against the great weight I am carrying.
Will this ever het easier?
It seems that once I get close to the surface more weight is added and I am pulled back down,
to the debths of the dark sea.
Confusion and chaos go on around me, while I am stuck in the painful, suffocating waters that are slowly taking my life away from me.
He is gone...Now I am dieing with him.
Will I ever find the strength to swim away?

The author's comments:
My grandpa died a little over a year ago and this poem shows how I have felt since then.

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