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Broken Hallelujah MAG

By Anonymous

Turn stale knob of radio on, effortless
crack of the wrist: infamous words pour
out ripped speakers, a hole-punched
reservoir.
Such a chatterbox -
gibberish sentences incomprehensible to
ears and mind (a shortage in the circuit),
letters squashed like sardines.
Hiccupped talk interrupted:
flamed lullaby spilling through, a
jaw-dropping funeral march (closed casket);
nothing but a rhythm whore,
pause.
Eavesdrop on explicit, newfound
streetlight song, tapered and perfect
like a birthday card.
Vibrate and quiver at complicated
iambs, eerie composition with a magnetizing
lure: a shovel for the grave, gravity menace.



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i love this so much!

on May. 13 2012 at 9:04 am
Shahiro PLATINUM, Johnston, Iowa
20 articles 2 photos 262 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Soon we must all choose between what is right and what is easy." - Dumbledore (Goblet of Fire)

wow, this was amazing! lov how you strung the words together, it was artful. nice work, keep it up!  :D

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on May. 1 2011 at 3:03 pm
tesswards32 PLATINUM, Perry Hall, Maryland
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Favorite Quote:
"And it's funny how it's the little things in life that mean the most, not where you live, what you drive or the price tag on your clothes. There's no dollar sign on a piece of mind." - Zac Brown Band

I love the way you put words together; the combinations you come up with seem like effortlessly creative masterpieces.

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on Dec. 11 2009 at 1:26 pm
jessie-w GOLD, Winnemucca, Nevada
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Favorite Quote:
To lose is inconceivable. Everyone wins in some way. You just have to push forward and leave the wreckage behind.

I agree with Hawkberry its a really hidden and thats what makes it so wonderful

on Oct. 28 2009 at 8:15 pm
ottersarah SILVER, Maryville, Tennessee
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Favorite Quote:
Everywhere, man blames nature and fate, yet his fate is only the echo of his character and passions, his mistakes and his weaknesses

It's beautiful and hidden. I love the fact that it is mostly a metaphor and the phrase "streetlight songs".