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The Special Day

October 13, 2009
By DizzyRae PLATINUM, Fort Washington, Maryland
DizzyRae PLATINUM, Fort Washington, Maryland
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Favorite Quote:
“For one human being to love another; that is perhaps the most difficult of our tasks; the ultimate, the last test and proof; the work for which all other work is but preparation.”
-Rainer Maria Rilke

The walls sweat and the air coughs.
What is this feeling?
Why is this a day to remember?
Life has frozen for just the minute of the sights.
Why is the beauty a death to itself?
As the beauty see’s, the love conquers.
As the love conquers, the walls begin to strike.
Life starts to melt as everything comes back to life.
Tis the season to be was where it begun.
But the feeling of heat warms what is to come.
Having this feeling is where love increases just by the sight.
The sight of being ready and to connect.
To become one and as a whole is exciting.
All of this is exciting, exhilarating, and emotional.
All these feelings just for one brief moment to have.
The wait was the exciting part but the words are the emotional part.
And to rush and prepare is the exhilrating part.
Smiles turn into secret thoughts as touching turns into a sensational stimulating hold.
The moment is almost over.
Cherish this.
For what’s before thee is the beauty for the eye to see

The author's comments:
I wrote this during my pre-college english class. We had to create an poem without using pronouns. The poem is basically about marriage.

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