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Commonly Unique MAG

By Unknown, Unknown, Unknown

   

Common interests, common pride

Common joy and pain

Common laughter, common tears cried

Common loss and gain



All this we know, all this we share

We're two of a kind, you might say.

We don't say, "I love you," we don't say, "I care,"

For actions spoke louder this day.



Commonly ostracized, commonly hurt

His arms give me comfort, I give back in kind.

Common meals end with a different dessert ,

My lips he seeks, his lips I find.



Our minds , both sharp and clear as the morning sky

Our hearts share the warmth of the sun.

We hope this will last; but we know, he and I,

That others will find us ere our lives are done.



But for now there's no question

Of this gift from above.

'Tis for our common uniqueness

That we've fallen in love.





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Ghoshy said...
on Jan. 3 2013 at 6:34 pm
Ghoshy, Allentown, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
Success is no accident. It is hard work, perseverance, learning, studying, sacrifice, and most of all, love of what you are doing or learning to do.
-Pele

The repetition of words was used wonderfully and tells such a romantic yet underlyingly heartbreaking. Great poem!

on May. 20 2011 at 9:23 pm
Dedegirl PLATINUM, Williamsburg, Virginia
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Favorite Quote:
"plain & simple, black & white"

This is amazing :)
Your a very talented writer!

on May. 4 2011 at 7:48 am
Danni_MSY PLATINUM, Dwight, Illinois
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Favorite Quote:
Live life to the fullest. You never get out alive anyway.

It basically mirrors my life right now:) thank you for writing this, it's amazing

on Apr. 28 2011 at 11:49 pm
remembermeplz PLATINUM, Friend, Nebraska
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Favorite Quote:
"when the power of love overcomes the love of power, the world will know peace" -- Jimi Hendrix

I like the title when I saw it I had to read this poem and Im so glad I did!Its amazing and it really flows =D

Amazing work keeep it up =D


on Nov. 25 2010 at 5:15 am
summer.x BRONZE, Singapore, Other
4 articles 1 photo 13 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Keep your face to the sunshine and you cannot see the shadows."

"Life isnt about how many breaths you take... its about the moments that take you're breath away."

i really love the idea of this poem. stunning!

on Nov. 3 2010 at 1:49 pm
ciara schneider BRONZE, Brethren, Michigan
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Beautilful i enjoyed it!!

on Jun. 2 2010 at 2:39 am
Chinadoll BRONZE, Dallas, Texas
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Awesome! It flows well, great words, and it's got a meaning. 5 Stars!!

on May. 19 2010 at 3:35 pm
wefellinLAVA PLATINUM, Copper Cliff, Other
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Favorite Quote:
'you touched my heart, through it's shell'

Gorgeous writing.

on Mar. 6 2010 at 5:07 pm
hollyhottell DIAMOND, Redding, California
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Favorite Quote:
poetry is a diary written out loud

wow......this is great... i always try to put my feelings down on paper but it never ends out that awesome.. i love this poem.....it was really really good. you should check out my work...

Meezy GOLD said...
on Mar. 6 2010 at 4:36 pm
Meezy GOLD, Hutchinson, Kansas
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Favorite Quote:
Don't think twice, it's all right.

I really enjoyed this. I felt the story. Great job.

on Dec. 8 2009 at 5:25 pm
ShernayB. DIAMOND, Southfield, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
"Some things will never change"---Tupac

awwwww. This is so beautiful. I loved it. Passionate words. Good job!