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Autumn Dreams

January 5, 2010
By ephemeral_dream GOLD, Easterton Sands, Other
ephemeral_dream GOLD, Easterton Sands, Other
11 articles 0 photos 10 comments

Favorite Quote:
"you know that place between asleep and awake, the place where you can still remember dreaming? thats where i love you peter pan, thats where i'll be waiting" Tinkerbell

Autumnal colours blend gold to brown,
Mythical creatures see rose in the thorn.
Dreaming of forests, and far reaching lands,
Storybook characters, movement of hands

Seeking for more, at quickening pace,
Bus wheels move faster, the passenger’s race,
Out of control, whilst wishing to find
A fairy tale ending; An ethereal kind.

Ephemeral fantasies lighten the shroud,
Yet still without answers - Wishing aloud.
More candled cakes, each candle in vain,
Embers rekindled, extinguished by rain

Angel in your eyes, such visions transpire,
Sunlight exposes each flawless Vampire,
Tears fall freely, as memories arise,
Lifelong embraces, liberated cries.

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This article has 3 comments.

on Jan. 28 2010 at 8:43 am
AngelForeverBleedingLove DIAMOND, Frederic, Wisconsin
65 articles 3 photos 248 comments

Favorite Quote:
You say you don't remember,
But I will never forget

this is very polished. good job!

Skeezics GOLD said...
on Jan. 26 2010 at 7:21 pm
Skeezics GOLD, Eatonville, Washington
12 articles 0 photos 87 comments

Favorite Quote:
A childs voice, however honest and true, is meaningless to those who have forgotten how to listen.
Everyone faces obsticals. What defines you is how you overcome them. -J.R. Celski

Wow. This poem is awesome. I love the word choice. Great job.

on Jan. 25 2010 at 2:02 pm
Fredwardness SILVER, Romeo, Michigan
8 articles 6 photos 211 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The stars are blazing like rebel diamonds cut out of the sun" -The Killers (Read My Mind)

"If you don't know where you're going, any road will take you there." -George Harrison

That was really pretty. I like how you used some larger words that most people woudn't put in their writing. It def. added to this. Overall good job.