War Journal: Entry 1 | Teen Ink

War Journal: Entry 1

May 16, 2008
By Anonymous

time to christen these pages and bless them with my ink
as my pen scratches paper i know we're both in sync
the ink is the blood and tears of my soul
i grab the pen and go out of control
when will it step i dont know
not till every thought is out of my head
ever word is written in this pad
no this wont end
not untill i get victory over my own mind
this is a battle that must be won
i wont tell anyone of this untill its won
the war has just begun
there is still more to come this is just page one


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AVERAGE BRONZE said...
on Jan. 30 2011 at 6:28 pm
AVERAGE BRONZE, Rosehill, Virginia
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IN THE BEGINNING IT FLOWS VERY WELL AND IS CREATIVE. AS IT GOES ON IT SEEMS AS IF U FORCED IT A LITTLE AND THE CREATIVITY DROPS JUST A TAD. I LIKE YOUR IDEA AND FIND THIS TO BE VERY INSPIRING GOOD JOB =)