Secret | Teen Ink


May 22, 2010
By manga_maniac SILVER, Bloomington, Indiana
manga_maniac SILVER, Bloomington, Indiana
8 articles 1 photo 79 comments

A secretive hidden surprise,
a ninja slinking in disguise,
a private little hideaway,
a place unknown, but safe to play,
an old clock on the tip top shelf,
holds secrets only it knows,
like I myself...
I whisper into an open ear,
secrets are everywhere,
but there's one near,
mysteries are mysterious,
but don't become delirous,
searching for one, not your own,
some things are better left alone

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on Feb. 18 2012 at 2:05 pm
WritersArt GOLD, Spring, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
"Paper is more patient that man." -Anne Frank
"Always do what you are afraid to do." -Emerson

This is beautiful. Such pretty diction.

on Jan. 2 2012 at 4:50 am
AnimaCordis GOLD, London, Other
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Favorite Quote:
"Evil is when the good do nothing"

Really pretty and a nice use of language!! Really interesting imagery too.

Hoosierpop said...
on Nov. 30 2011 at 1:50 pm
The closing sentiment is oh so true!

Andydog said...
on Nov. 30 2011 at 7:10 am
Very other worldly poem!

on Sep. 4 2010 at 9:01 pm
wildheart SILVER, Albany, Oregon
7 articles 0 photos 11 comments

Favorite Quote:
"God doesn't believe in Atheists, therefore they don't exist." "Spoon!" "Looka that batch of kills that just got kowed."

Wow you have caused me to re-love rhymed poetry. Nice job, and the art you chose goes well with it somehow. Keep it up!

MayDay SILVER said...
on Jul. 20 2010 at 11:10 pm
MayDay SILVER, Bloomington, Indiana
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Favorite Quote:
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This is fantabulous!!!! I love it, the rhyming and the hidden story are really great!!!!!!!!

on Jul. 15 2010 at 11:04 am
FlyingNewt BRONZE, Bloomington, Indiana
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awesome poem