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Condensed Hate Soup

January 13, 2011
By byyynx BRONZE, York, Pennsylvania
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byyynx BRONZE, York, Pennsylvania
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Art is what you can get away with.

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I love to hate you.
I hate your eyes

their shape
their size.

The way you walk

or, rather,

swagger.
I hate your name

first and last
I hate you so dearly

I forgot your middle.
My life hates your life,

(past lives too)
God hates himself for creating you.
I hate your voice

your laugh – had enough
I hate your thoughts

(or lack thereof)
I hate your drinking
I hate your drugs
I hate your half-hearted

one-armed hugs.
I hate everything you’ve been
I hate everything you’ll ever be
I love to hate you
I hate that you’re too much like me.

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gleek1234 GOLD said...
on Jan. 23 2011 at 7:16 pm
gleek1234 GOLD, Burlington, Vermont
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You did let me go you left me broken and heartless, crying out for help, with no one to answer my calls-Shilpa Pierpont-Hale ( poem) Love hurts

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when i first read this i had thought that u were insulting someone bu then i read farther. this is a beautiful poem byyynx keep up the good work and don't ever stop i <3 ur work 
byyynx BRONZE said...
on Jan. 23 2011 at 6:08 pm
byyynx BRONZE, York, Pennsylvania
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Art is what you can get away with.

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Thanks for the feedback everyone! (:
kenna2013 GOLD said...
on Jan. 23 2011 at 4:55 pm
kenna2013 GOLD, Corinth, Kentucky
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&quot;love begins with a smile,grows with a kiss,and ends with a teardrop.&quot;

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This is a great piece, probably one of my favorites :) I love how the flow and word choice really adds to the over all mood.

Check out some of my pieces if you have the time (:

FirtziesLover13 said...
on Jan. 23 2011 at 12:00 pm
FirtziesLover13, Cheyenne, Wyoming
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&quot;Love is a gift that must be cared for and looked after&quot; -Daniel Radcliffe

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i really agree with this piece. it flows, you use great words. it is a great piece.
queenofstrange BRONZE said...
on Jan. 23 2011 at 9:07 am
queenofstrange BRONZE, Gaithersburg, Maryland
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Money is everywhere but so is poetry. What we lack are the poets.<br /> -Federico Fellini

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I really love the title. This is overall funny and bitter, I really like that combination.