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You Can't See

January 22, 2011
By ashleyn PLATINUM, Zeeland, Michigan
ashleyn PLATINUM, Zeeland, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
"Don't take life to seriously, nobody makes it out alive anyways"-Unknown

You can't see
what you've done to me,
how you left me,
how I'm still wishing you'll come back.

What you've done to me
left me shattered and broken.
Wishing you'll come back,
and how it's hurting me now.

I'm still shattered and broken
and you can't see
how it's hurting me,
after you left me.

The author's comments:
This is a pantoum poem that I wrote for my creative writing class and I love it! It just feels right, to sum up everything I am feeling.

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