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finally at peace

March 28, 2011
By GretaGibson PLATINUM, Vancouver, Other
GretaGibson PLATINUM, Vancouver, Other
23 articles 4 photos 23 comments

I am not sad or angry
As I sit here
I am at peace
As I look out the window
I pray for snow but I see rain
I don’t mind the rain anymore
Sometimes im fooled
By the rain
As it hit’s the light
Sometimes im fooled and I get angry
When the rain pretends to be something its not
Here the rain slows
To pick up speed
But it never stops
I am at peace with that
Finally at peace

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on Nov. 27 2011 at 3:52 pm
Plain-Jane ELITE, Grandview, Missouri
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Favorite Quote:
"And the Lamb at the center of the throne will be their Shepherd. He will guide them to springs of living water; and God will wipe away every tear from their eyes." Revelation 7:17

i agree. great wording! i'm not sure i understand "the rain slows to pick up speed". the poem gives a peaceful image

pinkowl BRONZE said...
on Nov. 27 2011 at 3:13 pm
pinkowl BRONZE, Tyrone, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
Jeremiah 29:11

very nice wording!