Miracles | Teen Ink


November 27, 2011
By Plain-Jane ELITE, Grandview, Missouri
Plain-Jane ELITE, Grandview, Missouri
108 articles 2 photos 76 comments

Favorite Quote:
"And the Lamb at the center of the throne will be their Shepherd. He will guide them to springs of living water; and God will wipe away every tear from their eyes." Revelation 7:17

Everlasting, ignorant.
Dancing, living, laughing, giving.
Troubles, heartbreak, pain.
Falling, dying, praying, crying.
Burdened, restless.
Frustrating, relentless.
Pondering, learning, tossing, turning.
Enlightenment, illumination.
Sensing, knowing, yearning, growing.
Reassured, firm.
Blind, hopeful.
Seeking, reaching, helping, teaching.
Harassment, rejection, ridicule.
Dreading, waiting, fearing, hating.
Tested, shaken.
Consuming, frightening.
Searching, pacing, panicking, racing.
Reminders, encouragement, help.
Listening, pleading, exploring, reading.
Satisfied, directed.
Patient, contagious.
Loving, freeing, showing, seeing.
Knowledge, revelation, sorrow.
Questioning, thinking, wondering, sinking.
Striking, paralyzing.
Haunting, omnipresent.
Convincing, stripping, isolating, gripping.
Promises, covenants, miracles.
Soothing, sharing, calming, caring.
Overcoming, joyful.

The author's comments:
Experimenting with a new type of poem I learned about. It looks so much cooler in format(all centered so that the lines go in and out).

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on Dec. 11 2011 at 2:24 pm
KWeiberg321 SILVER, Cocoa, Florida
8 articles 1 photo 18 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I figure life is a gift and I don't intend on wasting it. You don't know what hand you're gonna get dealt next. You learn to take life as it comes at you...to make each day count."

I think this is a unique way of writing. It's really impressive, in all honesty, and I loved how you gathered groups of words instead of inserting detail. Even without the detailed sentences we understood the poem. Overall, it's a really nice poem. (:

on Dec. 11 2011 at 2:21 pm
AnimaCordis GOLD, London, Other
13 articles 0 photos 131 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Evil is when the good do nothing"

This was very pretty, I like your use of vocabualry, it created lots of images in my mind. It's a really nice poem.

on Dec. 9 2011 at 8:33 pm
Prometheus PLATINUM, East Aurora, New York
29 articles 0 photos 106 comments
Wow.  Very well done in keeping with the form.  I can't say I've ever heard of this type of poem, but it's impressive.  Love how the mood shifts halfway through each stanza.