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I'm Done

December 1, 2011
By niner PLATINUM, Hartville, Ohio
niner PLATINUM, Hartville, Ohio
32 articles 0 photos 31 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Isn't it funny how you broke my heart, but I still love you with all the pieces?"
"It's easy to stand in a crowd, but it takes courage to stand alone"
"What would you attempt if you knew you could never fail?"

I’m done hoping we could work it out,
My heart is too broken to ever be fixed now,
And I’m done thinking that you’ll come around,
Because every time I do, I just get let down,
So I’m done laughing at every word you say,
Although it’ll be hard, I’m gonna go my own way,
I’m done with attempting to look you in the eye,
I’ve learned that even the innocent ones are capable to lie,
I’m done with trying to impress your cold heart,
You left me here to die; lonely in the dark,
I’m done letting my heart beat so fast,
I’ll prove to you that these tears are the last,
After all, I’m done letting you tear my heart apart,
But if I turn my back now, the end of me starts

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on Apr. 14 2012 at 8:32 am
snowleopard100 PLATINUM, New York City, New York
33 articles 1 photo 80 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Two roads diverged in a yellow wood, but I took the one less traveled by, and that has made all the difference."

I love the structure of this poem with te repetition, Rhyme scheme, etc. I feel that there were certain parts that could have been expressed in a more dramatic way to fit the rest of the poem. Otherwise nice job!!