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living or dying

February 10, 2014
By Katgirl SILVER, Fruitland, Idaho
Katgirl SILVER, Fruitland, Idaho
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Favorite Quote:
You'll never catch it if you never let go

Each night is like a tidal wave of life or death
I dream of a happy life where I am loved by him
I’m loved unconditionally
He doesn’t care about my bones
My weight
Or the voice that screams my name to never touch again
He loves me for who I am
But then I wake up
I’m only the few years younger captured amongst this small town world
You can’t be loved like that here
I’d rather die than stay here forever
But I want to wait it out and see
So maybe I’ll live just awhile longer
To see if these dreams could be
Maybe one day the word death
Wont sound so appealing

The author's comments:
just a sper of the moment one that simply describes what i see in the point of living

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poison1999 said...
on May. 30 2014 at 12:11 pm
poison1999, Whiting, Indiana
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Favorite Quote:
"life is like paper, and your actions u make is the marks of permanent pen liquid."

thx i draw alot of anime wolfs plus i even create myself as one too and i love ur posts too lol i cant write cuz i suc at thinking of wat to write but im insanley in love with art plus if u want to see more of my art u can follow me on insta my user is demonic_soul_43v3r

on May. 19 2014 at 8:21 pm
JJ_Lone PLATINUM, Davenport, Washington
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Awesome poem. That is sk true with me too.

Nobuo GOLD said...
on Apr. 15 2014 at 7:07 pm
Nobuo GOLD, Dio, Missouri
16 articles 1 photo 65 comments

Favorite Quote:

you're spot on what you aimed for. very real.  you should add more punctuation to make certain spots more understandable.  It's great as it is though

HudaZav SILVER said...
on Apr. 15 2014 at 6:30 pm
HudaZav SILVER, Toronto, Other
8 articles 6 photos 390 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Nothing is impossible; the word itself says 'I'm possible'!" -Audrey Hepburn

I think the last 4 lines are especially powerful, because I can relate and it gives good insight on what you see. Very beautiful. Good job!