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No Clue
February 20, 2009
i don't know if what i'm doing is wrong
i don't feel like i belong
i feel like a puzzle that's missing a piece
i feel like an outcast when i am teased
is there something wrong with me
something i can't see
i try to look ahead
as i do my heart is being shred
people expect to much of me
i just run away, i flee
i need to face my fears
stand up to all my peers
tell them to stop
now i'm on top
i conquered my troubles
now laying down in a pile of rubble
no one tells me what to do
i stand tall, as you should too
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This article has 19 comments.
PoetLaureate07 PLATINUM said...
on Feb. 24 2010 at 9:05 am
idk if i've said this yet or not, but write from the heart.... that's where all the good stuff comes from!!
abstractminded GOLD said...
on Feb. 22 2010 at 9:53 am
yeah dont remeber me i wrote that poem the truth u read
abstractminded GOLD said...
on Feb. 22 2010 at 7:40 am
wow this is a very good poem....u definitely have a great writing sensability
bound4life4ever PLATINUM said...
on Feb. 19 2010 at 6:26 pm
hey... in the beginning of this poem you said u felt like a puzzle missing a piece. i can tell you what that piece is if u wanna know. its something amazing. nice work by the way! i love this poem cuz its reallly easy to realte to.
GABBY
GABBY
PoetLaureate07 PLATINUM said...
on Feb. 17 2010 at 8:45 am
Wonderful!!! I can actually relate!!! I'm like you... i write about experiences or just feelings... Check out some of my stuff....... XD
Hey :)
This is really good; it is straight to the point and expresses real emotions ...
um if I could suggest one thing...I'd say that, this piece is very strong and very true and real and raw....don't feel like you have to have a rhyming scheme. Sometimes the most powerful poems have no scheme at all. Good job though :) you're talented.
This is really good; it is straight to the point and expresses real emotions ...
um if I could suggest one thing...I'd say that, this piece is very strong and very true and real and raw....don't feel like you have to have a rhyming scheme. Sometimes the most powerful poems have no scheme at all. Good job though :) you're talented.
MoreThanYouKnow PLATINUM said...
on Apr. 30 2009 at 4:03 pm
wow this really amazing :) a lot of people write good poetry but urs is the kind people refer to when writing their own
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