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lighTining sTrike

March 21, 2009
By lamelola GOLD, Wichita, Kansas
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lamelola GOLD, Wichita, Kansas
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The problem is, you think you have time.

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There’s a sparkle in your eye
I see it every time you
Laugh, smile, and cry
The night I knew
I love you
I started to cry
This sensation was like no other
In my mind
For love
It hit like a lightning strike
So beautiful, so bold
Once I opened my eyes you were there
Smiling down at me
I looked up seeing your face blurred
From the tears in my eyes
I see that sparkle in your eyes
I see it every time you
Laugh, smile, or cry.

© Steve A., Goodyear, AZ

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i was inspired with this piece by the help of my baby brother
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Egyptiangirl13 GOLD said...
on Jul. 1 2010 at 5:52 pm
Egyptiangirl13 GOLD, Kansas City, Missouri
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\&quot;either write something worth reading or do something worth writing. -Benjamin Franklin<br /> <br /> \&quot;If columbus would have turned back, no one would have blamed him. No one would have remembered him either.\&quot; <br /> <br /> \&quot;If music be the food of love, play on.\&quot;

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wow this is really good and touching that you wrote it for your baby brother-i hope that he liked it-cause i know i did:) great job and please check out my work sometime-when you get the chance!