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lighTining sTrike

March 21, 2009
By lamelola GOLD, Wichita, Kansas
lamelola GOLD, Wichita, Kansas
14 articles 19 photos 45 comments

Favorite Quote:
The problem is, you think you have time.

There’s a sparkle in your eye
I see it every time you
Laugh, smile, and cry
The night I knew
I love you
I started to cry
This sensation was like no other
In my mind
For love
It hit like a lightning strike
So beautiful, so bold
Once I opened my eyes you were there
Smiling down at me
I looked up seeing your face blurred
From the tears in my eyes
I see that sparkle in your eyes
I see it every time you
Laugh, smile, or cry.

The author's comments:
i was inspired with this piece by the help of my baby brother

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on Jul. 1 2010 at 5:52 pm
Egyptiangirl13 GOLD, Kansas City, Missouri
14 articles 0 photos 498 comments

Favorite Quote:
\"either write something worth reading or do something worth writing. -Benjamin Franklin

\"If columbus would have turned back, no one would have blamed him. No one would have remembered him either.\"

\"If music be the food of love, play on.\"

wow this is really good and touching that you wrote it for your baby brother-i hope that he liked it-cause i know i did:) great job and please check out my work sometime-when you get the chance!