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The Carousel
January 6, 2010
Its not like I can stop,
I can’t just leave it all behind,
I know I can’t tell anybody,
but I can’t get it off my mind,
I haunts me like a ghost,
hangs over me like a storm,
but somehow you can’t see it,
beneath this act that I perform.
I’m such a hypocrite,
a liar, a horrible friend,
but I’m too scared to tell you,
scared our friendship will end.
We’re going in circles,
my life’s become a carousel,
I want so badly to just get off,
to escape this living hell.
© Kimberly C., Houston, TX
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irishfreak16 said...
on Jan. 29 2010 at 11:35 am
sorry the link wasnt working
irishfreak16 said...
on Jan. 29 2010 at 11:34 am
I think it is a very close tie between this one and Finding the Cure...
I like these two, along with all of yours, because they are so true. You can tell you have been through a lot in your life and you have found a very positive and creative way to get out how you feel and I think that is inspirational... =D
I like these two, along with all of yours, because they are so true. You can tell you have been through a lot in your life and you have found a very positive and creative way to get out how you feel and I think that is inspirational... =D
irishfreak16 said...
on Jan. 29 2010 at 11:33 am
I think it is a very close tie between this one and Finding the Cure...
http ://teenink .com /poetry/song_lyrics/article/152121/Finding-the-Cure/
I like these two, along with all of yours, because they are so true. You can tell you have been through a lot in your life and you have found a very positive and creative way to get out how you feel and I think that is inspirational... =D
http ://teenink .com /poetry/song_lyrics/article/152121/Finding-the-Cure/
I like these two, along with all of yours, because they are so true. You can tell you have been through a lot in your life and you have found a very positive and creative way to get out how you feel and I think that is inspirational... =D
irishfreak16 said...
on Jan. 29 2010 at 11:28 am
i like this one and finding the cure...
http ://teenink .com /poetry/song_lyrics/article/152121/Finding-the-Cure/
Finding the cure has a really good rhythm to it, and it shows that you have been through a lot in your life... all of your poems do. Its good to see that you are channeling your past into such creative forms of genius!!!
http ://teenink .com /poetry/song_lyrics/article/152121/Finding-the-Cure/
Finding the cure has a really good rhythm to it, and it shows that you have been through a lot in your life... all of your poems do. Its good to see that you are channeling your past into such creative forms of genius!!!
hbananabread93 GOLD said...
on Jan. 29 2010 at 11:25 am
haha thank you! i guess large words just come to me sometimes... what would you say is your favorite of my poems? just wondering because I really enjoy the feedback you are giving me...
irishfreak16 said...
on Jan. 29 2010 at 11:24 am
hey, i've been reading some of your other poems! WOW i really like your style! and your useage of large words
hbananabread93 GOLD said...
on Jan. 29 2010 at 11:23 am
=D!!!!!!!!!
irishfreak16 said...
on Jan. 29 2010 at 11:22 am
you're welcome
hbananabread93 GOLD said...
on Jan. 29 2010 at 11:21 am
haha well thank you again! =D
irishfreak16 said...
on Jan. 29 2010 at 11:20 am
hey its kool! im just glad that someone can put it into words as beautifully as you can!
hbananabread93 GOLD said...
on Jan. 29 2010 at 11:19 am
haha thank you soo much!!! =D
i really appreciate it....
and i'm sorry that you can relate... =/
i really appreciate it....
and i'm sorry that you can relate... =/
irishfreak16 said...
on Jan. 29 2010 at 11:17 am
i love this poem! i can really relate to it!!!!!!!
hbananabread93 GOLD said...
on Jan. 26 2010 at 11:47 am
thank you! =D
kzimmerman said...
on Jan. 26 2010 at 11:46 am
Nice Job!!!!
hbananabread93 GOLD said...
on Jan. 26 2010 at 11:45 am
hey, thanks!!! =D
BMILLZINYOURFACE said...
on Jan. 26 2010 at 11:44 am
WOW THIS IS AN AMAZING POEM, GREAT JOB YOU'VE GOT SKILLZ
hbananabread93 GOLD said...
on Jan. 26 2010 at 11:28 am
this is to everyone! =D
hbananabread93 GOLD said...
on Jan. 26 2010 at 11:28 am
oops... thanks!! =D
hbananabread93 GOLD said...
on Jan. 26 2010 at 11:27 am
Thank you so much!
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