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So Perfect
July 15, 2011
She is so perfect,
so pretty.
They all worship
all that she is.
She takes up his room,
every bit.
He is all hers,
She is his.
I wish I could be her,
so flawless.
God has handcrafted
her kind.
He loves her
no matter what happens,
she’s perfectly polished
and shined.
There she is now,
walking past.
I wish she would notice
my care.
I can’t help but cry
when I see her.
The pain is just too strong
to bear.
© Eveliz V., Bayamon, Puerto Rico
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wordlover27 GOLD said...
on Aug. 27 2011 at 8:19 am
I can totally relate...it stinks when it seems that someone is prettier and more popular than you are... :/ Great job!
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