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Lost in Love

June 17, 2012
By lipglosser PLATINUM, Merrimack, New Hampshire
lipglosser PLATINUM, Merrimack, New Hampshire
22 articles 0 photos 17 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Your pain is the breaking of the shell that encloses your understanding." -Khalil Gibran

When you touch me my worries melt away
Your touch so soft my heart would sway
And you would brush aside my hair
And whisper gently in my ear
That nothing could break our love
Because it was a gift from above
You would look into my eyes
And say they reminded you of blue skies
I lay on the bed a tear escaping my eye
Trying hard not to cry
I thought our love would always last
I never thought it would become a thing of the past

My love I will never forget
How we watched the sunset
We sat on top of a hill
And you kissed me and time stood still
Nobody else was here
Except for the moment we had to share

I made an album of us together
Our memories preserved in photos forever
We looked through it, our spirits so high
But now when I look through it I start to cry
A tear slides down my cheek
My heart suddenly becomes weak
I picture our hands slipping away
Us going our separate ways
I wish I could have kissed you one last time
Before you stopped being mine

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This article has 3 comments.

on Jul. 18 2012 at 9:13 pm
carothesparrow GOLD, Lilburn, Georgia
15 articles 9 photos 248 comments

Favorite Quote:
dont give up she will talk someday my friend made this quote she is really cool cause she understands about my sister
it starts with ONE to make a differerence!!! i learned this quote at a leadership camp

ohana means family no one gets left behind

very nice and creatively writen

DanielM SILVER said...
on Jul. 16 2012 at 10:44 am
DanielM SILVER, Kent, Washington
6 articles 1 photo 245 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I would rather hated million times for what i did then loved a million times for what i didn't do." - Daniel Moto
" I've sought out to be the best i could posibly be but when i hit a roadblock in life what did i do, i had two choices either stay at the roadblock or i take this roadblock and make of it and go around it and achieve my goal. So, what will it be?"- Daniel Mathia

"People take love like its a four letter word or just a phrase that you tell people or your friends all the time. But in reality love is much bigger than a merely phrase or 4 letter word. Instead love is a genuine promise or covenant to that special person."-Daniel Mathia

“Why change yourself when you were made perfect and wonderfully by the creator of everything?” – Daniel Mathia

“If live is not hurtin then were really not living in.” – B. Reith

I really like your poem. The beginning was really good. I like the line your touch is so.soft it sways my heart. Great usage of imagery. Suggestion: use more imagery your good at it

on Jul. 12 2012 at 5:03 am
Madu_Bala BRONZE, Colombo, Other
4 articles 1 photo 31 comments

Favorite Quote:
To unpathed waters, undreamed shores - Shakespeare

What can be more tragic than to feel the boundlessness of the surrounding beauty and to be able to see in it its underlying mystery... and yet to be aware of your own inability to express these large feelings… Isaak Levitan

It's sad and lovely! lipglosser, will u pls read and comment my work too?