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Jerk MAG

January 2, 2009
By Christina BRONZE, Clifton, Virginia
Christina BRONZE, Clifton, Virginia
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I love your voice,
your soft brown hair.
I love your eyes
and love your stare.

I love your laugh,
your cocky smirk,
your stupid jokes.
You precious jerk,

you know I do.
I want my hands
all through your hair
each treasured strand.

I’m wrapped around
your finger still.
Am I yet yours?
Your love does kill

the things I hold
so close to me
and yet you’re the
best jerk I see.



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magiclover13 said...
on Oct. 28 2010 at 10:18 am
This is so sweet. People don't know about love until it's said and done.

CChloe said...
on Oct. 26 2010 at 8:25 pm
CChloe, St.Helens, Oregon
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Oh my gosh! I was reading this, and I totally get it! My boyfriend is JUST like that! I love him, yet everything about him screams "JERK!" Its actually quite horrible :/ Love the poem though! :D

on Oct. 26 2010 at 7:24 pm
smileyface9 SILVER, Meadow Vista, California
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me too! I love it :D

on Oct. 26 2010 at 7:22 pm
Jing.a.ling BRONZE, Saluda, South Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
"Without suffering there'd be not compassion!-Nickolas Sparks

I loved this poem its very good and it reminds me of myself!!

on Oct. 26 2010 at 6:55 pm
Poet_in_Motion PLATINUM, Sharon, Massachusetts
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;Love one another.&quot; &ndash;George Harrison (his last words)<br /> <br /> &quot;and down they forgot as up they grew&quot; &ndash;e.e. cummings<br /> <br /> &quot;The sea is just a wetter version of the sky...&quot; &ndash;Regina Spektor

I love this poem so so so much. It's supremely well-written, and I relate to the subject completely! You are very talented; don't ever stop writing. :) <3

on Oct. 26 2010 at 5:41 pm
BeautyandBeast BRONZE, St.Peters, Missouri
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Favorite Quote:
Mom: I learned my lesson, I had three of you!<br /> Daughter: You didn&#039;t learn your lesson, you had three of us!!! lol :D

this reminds me of my bgf

on Oct. 26 2010 at 4:19 pm
WynterPage95 ELITE, Monticello, Arkansas
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;It&#039;s better to burn out than to fade away...&quot; -Kurt Cobain

this reminds me of my own personal experiences...you go grl!

on Oct. 26 2010 at 10:05 am
MirandaLee BRONZE, Ewing, Kentucky
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;You don&#039;t burn out from going to fast. You burn out from going to slow and getting bored.&quot; Cliff Burton (Bassist of Metallica) -Rest In Peace- &hearts;

This is really good. (: ♥

Lacieee said...
on Oct. 26 2010 at 9:42 am
This was superr good :) i really liked it and i totally know how you feel. gooodd job

on Oct. 25 2010 at 1:16 pm
Tatyana DIAMOND, Colorado, Colorado
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this is really good...keep writting

on Oct. 24 2010 at 6:32 pm
WannaBeWriternumbertwo BRONZE, Brooklyn Park, Minnesota
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;If you cannot read this, please ask the flight attendant for assistance.&quot;<br /> United Airlines Flight Safety Brochure<br /> _________________________________________________________________________________

This descibed me and my boyfriend to a T! I think everyone can relate at one point of their lives. this is a wonderfull poem!

on Oct. 23 2010 at 11:03 pm
BellelaVie SILVER, Fairbanks, Alaska
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I can really relate to this right no in my life. It was an amazing ballad and I'm sure I will read it over and over again. it is cute and sweet, but sends a message of torment in the heart. it really makes you think.

on Oct. 23 2010 at 11:25 am
Lymairie BRONZE, Milwaukee, Wisconsin
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Favorite Quote:
Love mostly all

LOVE IT!! <3

honanmana said...
on Oct. 20 2010 at 9:47 pm
This is adorable!

on Oct. 20 2010 at 5:15 pm
sidneynicole BRONZE, McKinney, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;When life knock you down to your knees, just know you are in a perfect postition to pray.&quot;

i lovedd this ! i could relate to this poem

xoxoemoxoxo said...
on Oct. 20 2010 at 8:16 am
this is a really good poem i enjoyed it(:

nygal252 said...
on Oct. 18 2010 at 5:10 pm
i have to agree with s m wells "jerk"deffetnly pulls you in

S M Wells said...
on Oct. 15 2010 at 3:02 pm
I thought it was nothing extaordinairy at fist. But Every time I see the tittle, I have to go back and read it again.

on Oct. 15 2010 at 6:52 am
TimmothyMark GOLD, Hertford, North Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;I can do all things through Christ who stregthens me.&quot; - Phillipians 4:13

Amen girl, Amen.

Natarita GOLD said...
on Oct. 15 2010 at 2:08 am
Natarita GOLD, Chandler, Arizona
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Favorite Quote:
I am good, but not an angel. I do sin, but am not the devil. I am pretty but not beautiful. I have friends but am not the peacemaker. I am just a small girl in a big world trying to find someone to love.

I just want to say I love this poem, reminds me of my ex. Nicely said.