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Weaker

April 30, 2021
By WolvesRain ELITE, Walton, Kentucky
WolvesRain ELITE, Walton, Kentucky
106 articles 1 photo 182 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Every secret of a writer's soul, every experience of his life, every quality of his mind, is written large in his works." Virginia Wolf


Hopes are crushed,

Future is burning.

Holding on to thin rope,

Still learning.

Will I ever find healing,

Or saftey somewhere.

Final stretch,

Go go go says my mind,

Race for the finish line.

Help me save me,

Before I sink,

Beneath the waves.

They say what doesn't kill you,

Makes you stronger,

But I'm weaker everyday.


The author's comments:

This is about the feeling where you feel like the whole world has turned their backs on you and you feel there is nothing you can do reminding people to think about what you say.


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on May. 11 2021 at 7:51 am
WolvesRain ELITE, Walton, Kentucky
106 articles 1 photo 182 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Every secret of a writer's soul, every experience of his life, every quality of his mind, is written large in his works." Virginia Wolf

Thanks!

Lydiaq ELITE said...
on May. 9 2021 at 1:07 pm
Lydiaq ELITE, Somonauk, Illinois
129 articles 33 photos 956 comments

Favorite Quote:
Love, because you can’t love your way out of the lunatic asylum, but it makes it more fun to be a lunatic.
--Me

I can't really think of how to improve this it's so wonderful even now.

on May. 4 2021 at 7:39 pm
WolvesRain ELITE, Walton, Kentucky
106 articles 1 photo 182 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Every secret of a writer's soul, every experience of his life, every quality of his mind, is written large in his works." Virginia Wolf

I really appreciate all the comments, for a while there I thought my poems weren't any good.

on May. 4 2021 at 2:27 pm
SparrowSun ELITE, X, Vermont
196 articles 22 photos 1038 comments

Favorite Quote:
"It Will Be Good." (complicated semi-spiritual emotional story.)

"Upon his bench the pieces lay
As if an artwork on display
Of gears and hands
And wire-thin bands
That glisten in dim candle play." -Janice T., Clockwork[love that poem, dont know why, im not steampunk]

the poem by its self was really cool, again tho, the sidenote doesn't entirely match up, tho it doesn't feel so out of place. but ur a really good author anyhow.
i would also like to say: if nobody comments on your work for months and months and months, don't let it get to you. but i try, and lydiaq actively does. and she is an awesome person just doesn't know it.