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Hopes

April 21, 2022
By emiedawson1 BRONZE, Lubbock, Texas
emiedawson1 BRONZE, Lubbock, Texas
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I admit it. 

I got my hopes up.

No. 

I didn't just get them up

I let them float

I let them fly

I let them soar

And then I watched them fall. 

No.

I didn't just watch them fall

I watched them crash

I watched them die

I watched them burn.

Like a bird

Flying above the world

Shot down

With a bullet

That hurt more 

Than the falling. 

My wings 

Have been ripped apart 

Torn away

Thrown aside

As though they didn't mean

The world to me.

But the problem is

 

They did. 


The author's comments:

I write poems often, but this one really speaks to me. This piece doesn't relate to just one situation, but many situations that kids all around the world face. 


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Afra ELITE said...
on May. 10 2022 at 12:43 pm
Afra ELITE, Kandy, Other
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Favorite Quote:
"A writer must never be short of ideas."
-Gabriel Agreste- (Fictional character- Miraculous)

So true and so relatable!!!
The flow was unexpected and it was so touching, especially the last few lines...
Love it!!!★★★