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Mother´s Hands

June 5, 2023
By kgjola8117 BRONZE, Rothester, Michigan
kgjola8117 BRONZE, Rothester, Michigan
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The sun illuminates grass, green and bright,

Breeze dances, trees sway with delight.

summer's warmth embraces every scene,

Flowers bloom, vibrant and pristine.

 

days stretch long, nights warm and clear,

loved ones gather, with joys and cheers.

With laughter and endless fun,

Memories woven, never undone.

 

sweet and radiant pleasures of summer's embrace,

Beach trips with ice cream, moments we chase.

Everyday holds treasures in sight,

Happiness spreads, painting the path of light.

 

Cherish these fleeting days,

Or stay inside and regret your ways.


The author's comments:

This is a final revision of a poem I´ve been writing in poetry about the Summer. The reason I chose this poem, was because it had the most major changes throughout the revision stages.


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