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Is It To Late?
August 27, 2009
Why do I alwase run back to you when my hart is broken?
You never fix it.
I just dont understand.
You tell me that you like me
an Ive tolled you the same,
and still everything stays the same.
You tolled me onece that you loved me, but I dident let myself to belive.
I should of kept my mouth shut,
an not said a thing.
But know you barly talk to me,
an nothing seems to be the same.
And know after all this time,
I know what I whant,
but know is probably to late.
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This article has 15 comments.
RachyRach333 SILVER said...
on Sep. 22 2009 at 8:43 pm
Thank you!
Undiscovered said...
on Sep. 14 2009 at 8:09 am
Well id did not like the first part but the last man it just changed my perspective of the whole poem!! it was just stupendous!!!
Writerzhand GOLD said...
on Sep. 13 2009 at 6:44 pm
I love the first line. I think this is how all of us girls feel at one point or another.
MorningStar15 DIAMOND said...
on Sep. 12 2009 at 7:48 pm
This really made my day lol i loved it. i said i wasn't going to point out the obvious, but don't worry about spelling, i don't, mainly cuz i am a bad at it though :) its always the meaning that counts ;) i love it tho my bf of almost 7 months broke up with me over email tonight and this is how i feel to a tee.
<3,
Kayla
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<3,
Kayla
P.s. Check out my work drop amessage
Schubster said...
on Sep. 11 2009 at 8:59 pm
haha i made a typo :P
Schubster said...
on Sep. 11 2009 at 8:59 pm
I like the words a theme A TON!!! :) all you really need to do is fix the typos. keep writing!
Faithband3 BRONZE said...
on Sep. 11 2009 at 4:31 pm
The poem is nice, but I personally don't like thew way you broke the rules of grammar. You need to master the rules before you can break them correctly and you just haven't mastered the m yet. Nice point though.
writer11 said...
on Sep. 11 2009 at 2:01 pm
yesm i think you should have done spell check. But i really do love this poem, it reminds me of a thing i have witha guy too.
fujipie said...
on Sep. 11 2009 at 10:14 am
w-o-w! this is something i'd called a gd poem...i lk the way the poet compsing this poem...bt, the spelling real sux=.="
wordweaver96 PLATINUM said...
on Sep. 11 2009 at 6:47 am
thank you so much for writing this! it's exactly how i feel!
ZebraWithoutStripes ELITE said...
on Sep. 9 2009 at 3:19 pm
this is written really well. just as a pointer you might want to try watching your spelling. but still great job, keep at it :]]
blingblang4eva ELITE said...
on Sep. 8 2009 at 5:45 pm
this is rly good. i feel this way about my exboyfriend. well done
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but how do I check out your drop messege..i havent had this acunt thing vary long lol so I dont no anything about it.