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Directions at the Mall

September 20, 2009
By bRonwYn_e GOLD, Bon Aqua, Tennessee
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bRonwYn_e GOLD, Bon Aqua, Tennessee
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Denial is expected in the face of puuure eeevil.

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Shop windows fly by,
in opposite directions.
Friends pull me
in opposite directions.
They and their moms loudly
discus opposite directions.
Food is sold
in the opposite direction.
My feet and eyes want to take me
in opposite directions.
Everyone is rushing
in opposite directions.
Clothes explode and land
in opposite directions.
I just might flee
in the opposite direction.

© Hoang P., Rochester, NY

The author's comments:
This was written after my wonderful shopping trip with two of my best friends. I'm not kidding, it really was great :)
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