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Precious Love

November 30, 2009
By dark_roses14 PLATINUM, Mazon, Illinois
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I love you angel.
That's what I hear.
Four simple words.
Tossed about like tumbleweeds.
Precious love

I used to laugh at the thought of love.
Until I found it for myself.
True love, I thought.
Undying love, he said.
I didn't want to believe it.
Precious love

I was in love my Junior year of high school.
I didn't believe it at first.
But the months went by.
And I found myself believing it.
Precious love

I wondered, why me?
My friends told me I was insane.
My mom told me it wasn't possible.
But I begged to differ.
I was in love.
Precious love

Then it was gone.
Lost in the wind
Like a tumbleweed.
I was crushed, sad, hurt, and most of all.
I was afraid to love again.
Whatever happened to
Precious love.

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dark_roses14 PLATINUM said...
on Nov. 18 2010 at 8:21 am
dark_roses14 PLATINUM, Mazon, Illinois
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ok travis. nice name btw lol
Savannainthesky GOLD said...
on Nov. 17 2010 at 12:53 pm
Savannainthesky GOLD, West Suffield, Connecticut
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aww wow that was really sweet it took my breath away Ijust wanna say... amazing, and if you have a chance i need you opinon on my works,

thx,

sunnyandsugar

TrinityCreed said...
on Nov. 15 2010 at 1:50 pm
okay alex, btw you can call me travis instead of trinitycreed.
dark_roses14 PLATINUM said...
on Nov. 15 2010 at 1:26 pm
dark_roses14 PLATINUM, Mazon, Illinois
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no problem :) i love making new friends. btw if youd like, you can call me alex instead of music lol but its entirely up to you
TrinityCreed said...
on Nov. 11 2010 at 9:54 am
Thanks. :)
dark_roses14 PLATINUM said...
on Nov. 9 2010 at 9:56 am
dark_roses14 PLATINUM, Mazon, Illinois
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sure! i'd love for you to call me your friend
TrinityCreed said...
on Nov. 6 2010 at 8:29 pm
Okay I wasn't sure; is it okay if I call you my friend?
dark_roses14 PLATINUM said...
on Oct. 20 2010 at 9:03 am
dark_roses14 PLATINUM, Mazon, Illinois
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oh no! i was being serious! you really did help!
TrinityCreed said...
on Oct. 18 2010 at 7:54 am
Did I say something wrong? by your first three words, it sounded like . . . well like you were annoyed or expected something else. If I did do something wrong, please tell me. I don't want to feel stupid.  
dark_roses14 PLATINUM said...
on Oct. 13 2010 at 1:37 pm
dark_roses14 PLATINUM, Mazon, Illinois
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mmm. thanks. alot. i recently got asked out and he told me he loved me after only a day of dating me. i was just kind of in shock. i mean, we'd talked for awhile before he asked me out, but it surprised me.
TrinityCreed said...
on Oct. 8 2010 at 9:01 am
You ask a very good question, I never thought of that. You can have feelings towards that person, but saying "I love you" is something very special to a person your dating. My 'so-called' dating experience has developed a little more than what it was. My first 'internet' date- If you can call it that- was some what good, but the girl I was with just wanted to talk and nothing more. Weeks went by and I first thing I said was a love poem. The girl was in shock, she did not expect it. It took her by surprised. My perspective would be this: give your relationship time, but do something out of the ordinary for that person. Don't instantly say "I love you," it's too rushy. Girls/guys dont like to be rushed on that subject. Basically what I'm saying: don't say "I love you" on the first date, give that relationship some time. But show little by little your affection towards that person each day.
dark_roses14 PLATINUM said...
on Oct. 6 2010 at 11:01 am
dark_roses14 PLATINUM, Mazon, Illinois
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thank you. if i may, can i ask your opinion on love? since your a guy, i wanna know your perspective. if you started dating a girl, would you tell her you loved her after only dating a day?
TrinityCreed said...
on Oct. 5 2010 at 10:11 am
That is a very nice poem. It's a sad poem. Yeah, I know I'm a guy reading this. But I have a soft side to my heart. :( For some odd reason I want to say it's a beautiful poem.