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January 2, 2010
By becky4 GOLD, New Port Richey, Florida
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becky4 GOLD, New Port Richey, Florida
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There always another way.

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It thrills me how affected he is by my words
but it also sends shivers down my spine.How one person can think soo much of another.Its
beyond me.Even in my wildest dreams the thought never even occured to me.It makes me wonder
what would I do.He already affects my life soo much yet somehow I'm still in control. If only
he knew how his every word sends me threw a new hoop.How his every action places doubts in
my mind.If only he could see how even the look in his eyes could penetrate the depths of
my soul could dull every carefully placed thorn.How weak he makes me.How solid he feels against
me.his very touch affects me soo deep my mind goes into a never ending haze.

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if you dont ask then I wont tell.Or soo we hope.
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