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If I Were in Charge of the World MAG

By Anonymous

(Apologies to Judith Viorst)
If I were in charge of the world
My favorite flip-flops would never wear out.
There would be no books of poems with the
last page missing,
No hairy spiders to hide in the corners.
If I were in charge of the world
I would have a never-ending string of puddles
to jump in,
And mothers would never scold their children
for tracking mud halfway down the hall.
If I were in charge of the world
There would never be hungry but always satisfied,
Except in the classroom, where
There would be endless shelves of books to feed
voracious minds.
I would find a way to make it easier
For everyone to understand that sometimes the same
stars can make
multiple constellations,
And that Archimedes was right:
You can move the world if only you have a lever and
a place to stand.



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on Nov. 22 2010 at 9:16 pm
DaydreamBeliever GOLD, Lockport, Other
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Favorite Quote:
If you live to be one hundred, I want to live to be one hundred minus one day, so that I'll never have to live without you. -Winnie the Pooh

very beautiful, it made me smile :)

I agree with everything you mentioned, i think if you were in charge of the world, it would be a very happy place:)


on Nov. 22 2010 at 4:17 pm
blogger887 BRONZE, Delland, Florida
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ummm i have heaard this poem before not this exact one but my teacher had one withh the same layout

on Oct. 31 2010 at 4:10 pm
Detective-C BRONZE, Lakeland, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
"Wait! It's morning in the Himalayas!"

Awesome!

I love how you write, it's not silly (like Judith's) and not boring (like many many others) Keep up the good work

(Yes I read If I Was In Charge of the World)


SUNDRY SILVER said...
on Oct. 31 2010 at 10:44 am
SUNDRY SILVER, BANGALORE, Other
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Favorite Quote:
"THE WORLD IS A STAGE WHERE EVERYONE PLAYS HIS PART!!!!"

DO YOU MEAN TO SAY THAT YOU ARE PERFECT?????? I DO NOT KNOW WHEATHER YOU ARE A PERFECT GIRL OR NOT BUT DEFINATELY YOU ARE A PERFECT POET. KEEP IT UP!!!!!!!

on Sep. 17 2010 at 10:29 pm
Eatfoodzap SILVER, Winchester, Massachusetts
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Favorite Quote:
"Humankind cannot gain anything without first giving something in return. To obtain, something of equal value must be lost. But if you can overcome the sacrifice and make it your own, you will gain an irreplaceable Fullmetal heart."- Edward Elric

Wow! This is beautifully simple. I love how you took all the little annoyances in life, instead of going too deep. And the last line was a perfect though-inducing clincher to a wonderful poem!

Keep your pencils sharp!

~Eatfoodzap


AsIAm PLATINUM said...
on Sep. 17 2010 at 10:01 am
AsIAm PLATINUM, Somewhere, North Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
"According to some, heroic deaths are admirable things. (Generally those who don't have to do it. Politicians and writers spring to mind.) I've never been convinced by this argument, mainly because, no matter how cool, stylish, composed, unflappable, manly, or defiant you are, at the end of the day you're also dead. Which is a little too permanent for my liking." — Jonathan Stroud (Ptolemy's Gate)

The good:  This was awesome!  I tagged it as a favorite!  I loved that you didn't get deep or political or religious - instead you looked at the everyday things that you would change to make the world better.  I especially loved the quote. :)

The bad: I truthfully can't think of anything!

The random: The apology was strange.  Was there a reason for it?

You have been inspected by J7X :)

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Ms.Hinojosa said...
on Aug. 31 2010 at 7:00 pm
i wrote this in 5th period for a class project. im a teenager nd this is what i think.

on Aug. 26 2010 at 10:18 am
thebushhippie PLATINUM, Sandown, New Hampshire
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Favorite Quote:
Leave behind your own footprints! :0)

Awesome job! I really like the topic, too. My favorite part of this poem was the end when you used a quote from Archimedes. Very creative and great job! :0)

on Aug. 26 2010 at 8:12 am
Phantom_Girl GOLD, Ft. Carson, Colorado
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Favorite Quote:
"If it comes out of the lion's mouth...it will be on the test."
-Mr. Bala

We did poems like this in my poetry and creative writing class. They're lots of fun to write and always seem to turn out well. I love yours. Keep up the good work.

Leah said...
on Aug. 26 2010 at 7:15 am
I love the ending, but you might want to work on the slight cliche-ness of the beginning. The topic is a good one, but one that's been used many times. It's your poem- you don't have to change it, under any means- but that's my suggestion.

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on Aug. 4 2010 at 9:13 pm
x0x0xJ SILVER, Wood Dale, Illinois
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Favorite Quote:
Sometimes the thoughts in my head get bored and go for a stroll out through my mouth. This is rarely a good thing.

I love this. :)

on Aug. 4 2010 at 6:27 pm
LaurenE. PLATINUM, Nashville, Tennessee
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Favorite Quote:
Two woods diverge in a yellow wood, and I- I took the one less traveled. And it has made all the difference. -Robert Frost

This is so good, no wonder why it's featured! I envy you! Don't ever stop! Check out some of my stuff and tell me what you think. 

on Aug. 4 2010 at 4:36 pm
splenda. SILVER, Century, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
"Fiction is obliged to stick to possibilities. Truth isn't." Mark Twain

thats what im saying.

on Aug. 4 2010 at 4:26 pm
pageturner PLATINUM, Brooklyn, New York
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Favorite Quote:
It's okay to daydream.. just as long as you get to do some of those daydreams.

Nice, is there any way you can continue on this?

 


on Aug. 4 2010 at 10:25 am
MelanieLouise PLATINUM, Plymouth, Minnesota
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Favorite Quote:
to live a creative life, we must lose our fear of being wrong

i love this, especially the ending, great work :) check out some of mine if you get the chance. keep writing, Mel

advicegiver said...
on Aug. 4 2010 at 9:04 am
advicegiver, Yukon, Oklahoma
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Favorite Quote:
to b or not to be

i really like this its very constructive

on Aug. 4 2010 at 7:41 am
PoeticTouch GOLD, Saida, Other
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Favorite Quote:
Learn from yesterday, live for today, hope for tomorrow

this is really niceee....plz check out some of my work if u get the chance, thanks:)

Abby said...
on Aug. 4 2010 at 4:50 am
that is really good.

on Aug. 4 2010 at 3:37 am
lizzie.rose. BRONZE, Lake Tapps, Washington
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i like it, (:

on Jul. 13 2010 at 8:03 pm
alwayssunshine PLATINUM, Charlotte, North Carolina
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Wow!! This is a really great piece! Nice job.