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If I Were in Charge of the World MAG

By Anonymous

(Apologies to Judith Viorst)
If I were in charge of the world
My favorite flip-flops would never wear out.
There would be no books of poems with the
last page missing,
No hairy spiders to hide in the corners.
If I were in charge of the world
I would have a never-ending string of puddles
to jump in,
And mothers would never scold their children
for tracking mud halfway down the hall.
If I were in charge of the world
There would never be hungry but always satisfied,
Except in the classroom, where
There would be endless shelves of books to feed
voracious minds.
I would find a way to make it easier
For everyone to understand that sometimes the same
stars can make
multiple constellations,
And that Archimedes was right:
You can move the world if only you have a lever and
a place to stand.



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on Jul. 13 2010 at 7:04 pm
MercedesXO DIAMOND, South Easton, Massachusetts
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Favorite Quote:
"I realize that life is risks. It's acknowledging the past but looking forward. It's taking chances that we will make mistakes but believeing we all deserve to be forgiven."
-The Dead Tossed Waves.

i love this. nice work:)

Eilatan GOLD said...
on Jul. 13 2010 at 6:12 pm
Eilatan GOLD, Old Greenwich, Connecticut
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Favorite Quote:
"Nobody is normal. Everybody in the world is a weirdo freak. Except you, which makes you a weirdo freak."

who's Judith Viorst?

on Jul. 13 2010 at 1:27 pm
wild-free BRONZE, Billerica, Massachusetts
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Favorite Quote:
"All good things are wild and free." - Henry David Thoreau

"It does not do to dwell on dreams and forget to live." - Albus Dumbledore

This piece is so beautiful and inspiring. A truly wonderful job! 

on Jul. 13 2010 at 10:56 am
writerinfinity PLATINUM, Arlington, Texas
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good job, it's really a beautiful peice, i love it. Keep writing your inspirational work. :)

on Jul. 13 2010 at 2:59 am
Conno_Rumsted PLATINUM, Philadelphia, Pennsylvania
21 articles 0 photos 5 comments

Favorite Quote:
"You understand...It is too far. I cannot take this body along with me. It is too heavy. Left behind, it will only be an old cast-off shell. There is nothing sad about an old shell"

"I would find a way to make it easier
For everyone to understand that sometimes the same 
stars can make
multiple constellations"

oh my god. that line got me

amazing. i love it! :D


x0x0xJ SILVER said...
on Jul. 13 2010 at 12:35 am
x0x0xJ SILVER, Wood Dale, Illinois
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Favorite Quote:
Sometimes the thoughts in my head get bored and go for a stroll out through my mouth. This is rarely a good thing.

Agreed.
:)))

on May. 30 2010 at 8:50 pm
nicole3324 BRONZE, Lasvegas, Nevada
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Favorite Quote:
I am a LOVER not a FIGHTER but I will FIGHT for what I LOVE

omg that is super cool i love it and that rocks

Thrush BRONZE said...
on May. 30 2010 at 6:30 pm
Thrush BRONZE, Tegaad, Other
4 articles 0 photos 65 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Live life to it's fullest extent, it's the only life you've got" "Enjoy yourself, be yourself, love yourself"

This poem is amazing. Great imagery.

Youngcricket said...
on May. 30 2010 at 4:34 pm
I love it this poem is one of the best that ive ever read!!!Keep on going!!!

on May. 30 2010 at 9:51 am
Patience97 PLATINUM, New Tripoli, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
"People believe that if we really want to eliminate something, focus on that. How much sense does it make for us to give the particular problem all of the energy, as opposed to focusing on trust, love, living in abundance, education, or peace? -Un.

Wow great poem :)

Congratulations :))


Safeleo said...
on May. 30 2010 at 3:15 am
Safeleo, Iwakuni, Other
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Favorite Quote:
"Looking up into the night sky is like looking into infinity - the distance is incomprehensible and therefore meaningless."
-Douglas Adams

This is so amazing!

on May. 21 2010 at 10:39 am
angel2745 BRONZE, Sacramento, California
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I love this! ♥

on May. 8 2010 at 3:23 pm
thirdeyeblind34 BRONZE, Champaign, Illinois
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Favorite Quote:
are you the sweet invention of a lover's dream, or are you really as beautiful as you seem?

that was BRILLIANT! I love your work!! and I don't say that often. I love how it's kind of through the eyes of a child who just wants to learn and have fun. and I loved the archimedes reference to moving the world. I would like to hear more :)

Rabaya GOLD said...
on May. 8 2010 at 1:34 pm
Rabaya GOLD, Jamaica, New York
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Wow this is really AMAZING!

on May. 8 2010 at 10:38 am
perfected_11 SILVER, Cheverly, Maryland
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Favorite Quote:
"Negative thinking limits gods possibilities for us and for others."
-Craig L

this was a great poem and so true

on May. 8 2010 at 9:38 am
Lost-In-Life GOLD, Whitby, Other
11 articles 0 photos 299 comments

Favorite Quote:
It's never to late, if it weren't for the last minute many things would never get done!

I love this! I completely agree with a lot of your points and find some parts very funny. A great poem!

Emiline SILVER said...
on May. 8 2010 at 8:19 am
Emiline SILVER, Nashville, Tennessee
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Favorite Quote:
"When deep injury is done to us, we will never recover until we forgive. Forgiveness cannot change the past. But it does enlarge the future."- Mary Karen Read

Wow. This is a really great piece! You should be proud of yourself. :P

Eilatan GOLD said...
on May. 8 2010 at 7:24 am
Eilatan GOLD, Old Greenwich, Connecticut
11 articles 1 photo 307 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Nobody is normal. Everybody in the world is a weirdo freak. Except you, which makes you a weirdo freak."

this is INCREDIBLE.

i'd like to live in that world.


on Apr. 16 2010 at 5:26 pm
Whisperer PLATINUM, O&#39Fallon, Illinois
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Favorite Quote:
I'd rather be hated for who i am, than loved for who I'm not~Anonymous

No individual has any right to come into and out of this world without leaving distinct and legit reasons for having passed through.~Anonymous

this is REALLY good. the last 2 lines are really encouraging. thank you and good work :)

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on Apr. 16 2010 at 3:49 pm
decembersun14 PLATINUM, Winchester, Massachusetts
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Favorite Quote:
"Life sucks. A lot. But you just have to keep on going. No matter what happens. You can never ever give up. You just have to roll with the punches, go with the flow, and always try your best to keep on going <3"

LOVE IT!! i love how it has an underlying sense of whimsy. very clever and moving as well