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Temptations

January 12, 2010
By Silence-Is-My-Virtue GOLD, Stansbury Park, Utah
Silence-Is-My-Virtue GOLD, Stansbury Park, Utah
10 articles 0 photos 34 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;The sentence below this is false.<br /> The sentence above this is true.<br /> Try to figure that out.&quot; -- unknown


Soft throat,
temptations overcome.
I love you ever so,
but how long must this last?
My longing,
my thirst...
Soon
this must pass.
Come with me,
take my hand,
see what I
am forced to be.
You turn away,
I understand,
then slowly you turn back,
on your knees you beg,
you want to be with me,
just like me,
an immortal soul,
forever a part
of the damned.
Your love is so strong,
you are so willing,
what can I do but agree?
With your soft, soft throat
at my lips,
you utter a quiet moan
as the burning
takes over your body.
Through the minutes I wait,
through the hours I wait
until you awaken
to a beautiful new place
full of amazing sights
you never knew.
Now we look
into each others' eyes
because behind the red tint
of the short-lived bloodlust haze
is the beautiful person
that is mine for eternity...


The author's comments:
I love vampires and stuff like that and got inspired. Pen goes in hand, words appear, i don't know how else to explain my writing process, LOL.

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on Sep. 4 2010 at 11:33 am
Silence-Is-My-Virtue GOLD, Stansbury Park, Utah
10 articles 0 photos 34 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;The sentence below this is false.<br /> The sentence above this is true.<br /> Try to figure that out.&quot; -- unknown

and about the vampire topic, i do understand about that and i didn't realize just how popular it was getting until after this was posted. im trying my best to stay off of vampire topics but its hard lol.

on Sep. 1 2010 at 4:51 pm
Silence-Is-My-Virtue GOLD, Stansbury Park, Utah
10 articles 0 photos 34 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;The sentence below this is false.<br /> The sentence above this is true.<br /> Try to figure that out.&quot; -- unknown

yeah, its published teenagers from i think only california or something like that. lol anyways its call a Celebration of Poets and i think its a 2010 version. either that or 2009 :)

on Aug. 31 2010 at 4:59 pm
NeverCaredForKool-Aid GOLD, Elkridge, Maryland
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Favorite Quote:
I don&#039;t believe in hell but I believe in my parent&#039;s couch-- Watsky

So on your Person Descriptio thing on your profile, you said you got this published in a book.  What is the book called?  Was it like a school-published book or was it by a publishig company?

PS.  Loved this, although yeah as Mikaela said, the whole vampire topic is no eclipsed by twilight.  No pun intended.


on Mar. 21 2010 at 10:32 pm
Silence-Is-My-Virtue GOLD, Stansbury Park, Utah
10 articles 0 photos 34 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;The sentence below this is false.<br /> The sentence above this is true.<br /> Try to figure that out.&quot; -- unknown

Yeah, i see what you mena. I wrote it when i was enering for a chool thin,g no biggie but i understnad.

Mikaela GOLD said...
on Mar. 14 2010 at 12:07 am
Mikaela GOLD, Bellingham, Washington
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;Here I stand, I can do no other.&quot;

It's good, but watch out: vampire stuff has been getting way overdone.