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Fixiated Cry

February 2, 2010
By xLpoet SILVER, Bristow, Virginia
xLpoet SILVER, Bristow, Virginia
6 articles 0 photos 43 comments

Favorite Quote:
"It is not the length of life but the depth of life"- Ralph Waldo Emerson


Gaze into my stare
You have no idea what it means
Untied at the seams
No obvious connection
You smile, I bleed
An ulcer that stabs through my linings
A hurt so serious
When I look to find you
You’re not there
I wish you knew how to catch my stare
Still you gaze…
At what you can’t understand
On the surface
Unable to immerse yourself in truth
Away; fading into me
Not looking at what you’re getting into
Shallow end of the stick-
Menacing huffs of air
Straining to fix the broken enigma
Still clothed, no sign of nakedness
It lies before you…
Comprehension never born
The shallow film consumes you



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DaniW PLATINUM said...
on May. 30 2010 at 9:16 am
DaniW PLATINUM, New Bern, North Carolina
29 articles 1 photo 31 comments

Favorite Quote:
People are like stained-glass windows. They sparkle and shine when the sun is out but when the darkness sets in their true beauty is revealed only if there is light from within.
By Elisabeth Kuebler-Ross

Your work is so intense! You can feel every word as you read

on Feb. 19 2010 at 2:49 pm
Bullet2MyHead09 BRONZE, Portavogie, Other
1 article 0 photos 4 comments

Favorite Quote:
The moral this time is girls make boys cry..

wow! amazing. i really like your work. it's really deep and expressive. and i love this poem! and thanks for checking out my work by the way. =)

xLpoet SILVER said...
on Feb. 17 2010 at 6:22 am
xLpoet SILVER, Bristow, Virginia
6 articles 0 photos 43 comments

Favorite Quote:
"It is not the length of life but the depth of life"- Ralph Waldo Emerson

Thank you so much! I'll definently check out your work.

hope4you said...
on Feb. 15 2010 at 2:26 pm
hope4you, Williamston, Michigan
0 articles 0 photos 12 comments

Favorite Quote:
"NEVER LET ANYONE MAKE YOU OUT TO BE LESS THAN WHO YOU TRULY ARE....STAY TRUE TO YOURSELF"

i like :) im amazed at your discription. keep writing, ill check them out for sure, check out my work