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Alone in the World of Lust

February 13, 2010
By Megan064 BRONZE, Orlando, Florida
Megan064 BRONZE, Orlando, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
"The key to success is presurverence and determination".

Walking through the door,
Nothing but silence streamed past her tender ears,
There she stood waiting for his warm presence,
A man of her dreams centered upon her vision,
His mouth begins to open,
Sending powerful sorrow emotions throughout her every vein,
Everything surrounding her closes in,
Nothing seems to be human anymore,
Her heart drumming like a drum line,
Turning black and slowly ripping at the seam,
Tears pondering down her fragile face,
Listening to the words slither from his mouth,
Caught to her disgust,
“I love you, but…..I have to much going for me. It’s best if we…”
Her elegance turns into clumsiness,
Her face blurs to a waterfall,
Knowing it’s the end,
Not just for today,

The author's comments:
After the boyfriend and i had a long conversation about us being together. We ended up braking up, this just happens to be what i wrote write after it occured.

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on Feb. 19 2010 at 7:42 pm
Dacey Beck SILVER, Leander, Texas
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You deserve to be in the magazine, this is an excellent poem, you are very good. i couldnt find the comment button and looked all over for it just because i wanted you to know how much i loved your poem, im sorry about what happened to you. i could not imagine me and my boyfriend breaking up but if it were to ever happen i would most definetaly write about it, like you:)