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Happy Ending

February 16, 2010
By AmberAnn_d-_-b SILVER, Laconia, New Hampshire
AmberAnn_d-_-b SILVER, Laconia, New Hampshire
9 articles 12 photos 30 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Don't sweat the small stuff, and its all small stuff."~CFC


I carried the rose through the broken path

I asked why.

I placed it on a stone, and begged foe mercy.

The pain of a heart at ache bared in my chest

An unsettling ease swept over me,

As I knew I was at rest.

The dream showed my concealed anguish

And the dear face of my love.

Awoken by a rock tapping the window

I went to look out, there he stood.

The window complained as I eased it open,

“Why are thou there? What is it thou want?”

A frown broke his face and he replied,

“Unsettled things make me uneasy

I feel guilty and know its my fault.

I was fraud to think thou a fool

As that name is mine own.”

The words engendered a tear to fall on my cheek.

“ Fool am I to think thou not of value to me

And fool it is that I may be

But alas I am not untrue, so as I say so

Take these words I utter from thine heart to you.

Meet me tomorrow among the fountain

And I shall prove myself worthy and true

But as I bid you farewell

there is one favor of which I ask.

May you climb down the eve

Bid me a proper good bye

Look deep into my soul with thine eye

And bid my a goodnight kiss.”


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Shahed GOLD said...
on Mar. 6 2010 at 9:24 am
Shahed GOLD, Tulsa, Oklahoma
16 articles 2 photos 350 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;People are like tea bags, they don&#039;t realize their own strength until they&#039;re dropped in hot water &quot;<br /> &ldquo;People are often unreasonable and self-centered. Forgive them anyway.<br /> If you are kind, people may accuse you of ulterior motives. Be kind anyway.&quot;

You're very welcome!

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on Mar. 6 2010 at 9:02 am
AmberAnn_d-_-b SILVER, Laconia, New Hampshire
9 articles 12 photos 30 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;Don&#039;t sweat the small stuff, and its all small stuff.&quot;~CFC

Thank you,, so much.

Shahed GOLD said...
on Mar. 5 2010 at 8:01 pm
Shahed GOLD, Tulsa, Oklahoma
16 articles 2 photos 350 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;People are like tea bags, they don&#039;t realize their own strength until they&#039;re dropped in hot water &quot;<br /> &ldquo;People are often unreasonable and self-centered. Forgive them anyway.<br /> If you are kind, people may accuse you of ulterior motives. Be kind anyway.&quot;

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