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Carnival

February 26, 2010
By theEMOrequiem GOLD, Aurora, Colorado
theEMOrequiem GOLD, Aurora, Colorado
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Just because it's green doesn't mean it's edible!!!!


I'm trapped by a fence that can't seem to break.
Watching children play, and eat cotton candy.
I'm a little kid too.
Why won't they let me out?
I see carnivals and events, held right by my backyard.
I sit there watching through my wooden fence.
Trying to make fun of my own, I mimic walking on thin wire.
Just like them.
I try swallowing twigs just like the sword swallower.
But I just end up gagging a bit.
Why can't I play too?

"Whoa, whoa, whoa." A painted face said.
He looked funny. I laugh.
I walk up to the fence and he talks to me.
"Don't swallow those you'll hurt yourself." he says.
"Then why doesn't the sword swallower get hurt?" I ask.
"Because he's done it before. Why don't you ask your mommy to come out here and play with us?"
"I don't have a mommy." I say. "My daddy says that I don't need the outside world.
I could see it in the funny man's eyes. He looked concerned.
"Don't worry bout me. I'll be fine."
"Here." He hands me a cotton candy and I smile with my mouth slightly open.
"Thank you very much Mr. Funny man." I say.
He crosses his eyes and I laugh some more.

Then he walks away.


The author's comments:
This poem is about Jaycee Dugard. How she was kidnapped for eighteen years and was concealed from the outside world. But the etails aren't correct. I just got the inspiration to add this.

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on Mar. 6 2010 at 6:23 pm
Destiny21 SILVER, Wendover, Nevada
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Giving up doesnt mean your weak. sometimes it means your stronger to let go

sure but u sould check out some of mine

on Mar. 6 2010 at 6:17 pm
Destiny21 SILVER, Wendover, Nevada
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Giving up doesnt mean your weak. sometimes it means your stronger to let go

sure but check out some of mine

on Mar. 6 2010 at 10:25 am
theEMOrequiem GOLD, Aurora, Colorado
17 articles 0 photos 12 comments

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Just because it's green doesn't mean it's edible!!!!

thxz!!!! can you check out some of my other poetry? I'm trying to get it more popular

on Mar. 5 2010 at 5:56 pm
Destiny21 SILVER, Wendover, Nevada
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Giving up doesnt mean your weak. sometimes it means your stronger to let go

love it this poem is great ur a great writter