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Love will Hurt

February 26, 2010
By Psychic_Sky13 GOLD, York, Pennsylvania
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Love is pain
Love will hurt
It will crush you
If your heart breaks
Love seems
Like such a great thing
Until the moment
When someone breaks your heart
They crush it
And break it
Until nothing is left
But little pieces
For you to pick up
And put back together again
Like a jigsaw puzzle
Except this time
It's missing a piece
And that peice
May never
Be fixed
Again

© Christina W., Towson, MD

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Psychic_Sky13 GOLD said...
on Mar. 20 2010 at 2:00 pm
Psychic_Sky13 GOLD, York, Pennsylvania
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Thank you for your opinion and thanks for saying I'm a great writer! You're great, too.
enchanted4yu PLATINUM said...
on Mar. 20 2010 at 12:40 am
enchanted4yu PLATINUM, Calabasas, California
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;Don&#039;t tell me the sky is the limit when there are footprints on the moon&quot;

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Very good I like your writing style. Constructive Criticism: I think it would have been even better if you ended saying how it is possible to find love DESPITE all the things that will go wrong (cuz they will haha) but overall i liked it ur a great writer
Psychic_Sky13 GOLD said...
on Mar. 6 2010 at 8:24 pm
Psychic_Sky13 GOLD, York, Pennsylvania
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aw thanks so much!
JohnDeereGirl DIAMOND said...
on Mar. 6 2010 at 7:06 pm
JohnDeereGirl DIAMOND, Westerlo, New York
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;I&#039;d rather be hated for who I am, than loved for who I&#039;m not&quot; <br /> &quot;Somewhere betweeen us talking, you saying I deserve better, and you making me laugh when I wanted to cry, I fell in love with you.&quot;

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Beutifully Awesome!