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February 26, 2010
By xBaByGiRrL22x PLATINUM, Pearl River, New York
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xBaByGiRrL22x PLATINUM, Pearl River, New York
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;The goal isn&#039;t to live forever, but create something that will.&quot;<br /> &quot;If you wanna go, baby let&#039;s go; if you wanna rock, I&#039;m ready to roll.&#039;&#039;<br /> &quot;No one ever said it&#039;d be easy. They just said it&#039;d be worth it.&quot; &lt;3

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Is it not enough to tell you how much I need you,
tell you how much I care?
How losing you was
altogether way too much to
bear?
I sit here now, looking up
at the one I thought I knew
inside-out;
Here I am, still fixated on
what you're all about
Is it too much for you to
answer when I ask,
who are you?

© Katie C., Libertyville, IA

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love, loss
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xBaByGiRrL22x PLATINUM said...
on Jun. 24 2010 at 6:27 pm
xBaByGiRrL22x PLATINUM, Pearl River, New York
22 articles 0 photos 280 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;The goal isn&#039;t to live forever, but create something that will.&quot;<br /> &quot;If you wanna go, baby let&#039;s go; if you wanna rock, I&#039;m ready to roll.&#039;&#039;<br /> &quot;No one ever said it&#039;d be easy. They just said it&#039;d be worth it.&quot; &lt;3

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lol ohh. really, no problem. i luvv 2 write. it meanz alot tht u took the time 2 read it:)) almost done wit Blood PRomise. Ya know, with most bookz & moviez, the 1st is alwayz the best but these do just keep getting beter. thx again!!!(:
taintedannex GOLD said...
on Jun. 17 2010 at 5:51 am
taintedannex GOLD, Hong Kong, Other
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The truth is that at some point, everyone&#039;s going to hurt you. You just have to decide who&#039;s worth the pain.<br /> <br /> Some say having something to lose is what makes you vulnerable. I believe that having something to lose only makes you stronger.

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* sorry, got cut off I think -- for actually bothering to read it. Your comment was so nice :)
taintedannex GOLD said...
on Jun. 17 2010 at 5:49 am
taintedannex GOLD, Hong Kong, Other
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Favorite Quote:
The truth is that at some point, everyone&#039;s going to hurt you. You just have to decide who&#039;s worth the pain.<br /> <br /> Some say having something to lose is what makes you vulnerable. I believe that having something to lose only makes you stronger.

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 mBlood Promise is great. I just finished Spirit Bound, and it only gets better! :) <3 Rose and Dimitri. No, thank you for actually bothering to re
xBaByGiRrL22x PLATINUM said...
on Jun. 16 2010 at 10:04 pm
xBaByGiRrL22x PLATINUM, Pearl River, New York
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;The goal isn&#039;t to live forever, but create something that will.&quot;<br /> &quot;If you wanna go, baby let&#039;s go; if you wanna rock, I&#039;m ready to roll.&#039;&#039;<br /> &quot;No one ever said it&#039;d be easy. They just said it&#039;d be worth it.&quot; &lt;3

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haha ikrr. i luv those bookz. think im like on the 4th one. Blood Promise?? thxx again 4 taking the time 2 read my work ;))
taintedannex GOLD said...
on Jun. 13 2010 at 7:35 pm
taintedannex GOLD, Hong Kong, Other
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Favorite Quote:
The truth is that at some point, everyone&#039;s going to hurt you. You just have to decide who&#039;s worth the pain.<br /> <br /> Some say having something to lose is what makes you vulnerable. I believe that having something to lose only makes you stronger.

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Wow, this is great! 

 

I also wanted to give you a shout out for our mutual love of tv shows and books.

<3 Vampire Academy. Seriously, Rose kicks a**. :)

Ninten1992 PLATINUM said...
on May. 29 2010 at 10:20 pm
Ninten1992 PLATINUM, New York, New York
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&quot;Forgive and Forget&quot;.

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Please keep writing you're so good at it!
xBaByGiRrL22x PLATINUM said...
on Mar. 28 2010 at 7:09 pm
xBaByGiRrL22x PLATINUM, Pearl River, New York
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;The goal isn&#039;t to live forever, but create something that will.&quot;<br /> &quot;If you wanna go, baby let&#039;s go; if you wanna rock, I&#039;m ready to roll.&#039;&#039;<br /> &quot;No one ever said it&#039;d be easy. They just said it&#039;d be worth it.&quot; &lt;3

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thxx u so much 4 ur commentz!! it made my day :)) so glad u liked it
FlyleafFreak DIAMOND said...
on Mar. 27 2010 at 5:16 pm
FlyleafFreak DIAMOND, Loveland, Colorado
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&quot;I have faith in fools;self confidence my friends call it&quot;~Edger Allan Poe<br /> &quot;In this world of infinite insanity, your friends are the best psychiatrists you will ever have.&quot;~Me

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Wow, I just totally love your style in all your work and especially this one. I can totally relate to this, really good!
xBaByGiRrL22x PLATINUM said...
on Mar. 10 2010 at 3:24 pm
xBaByGiRrL22x PLATINUM, Pearl River, New York
22 articles 0 photos 280 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;The goal isn&#039;t to live forever, but create something that will.&quot;<br /> &quot;If you wanna go, baby let&#039;s go; if you wanna rock, I&#039;m ready to roll.&#039;&#039;<br /> &quot;No one ever said it&#039;d be easy. They just said it&#039;d be worth it.&quot; &lt;3

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definetly will! thnxx so much
Milo! said...
on Mar. 9 2010 at 4:07 pm
I really love this. I really like how everyone can relate to this. I hope you keep writing, because this is great. You should check out some of my stuff. I think you would like it.