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Teenage Fairytale

March 2, 2010
By AKAmadison BRONZE, Douglasville, Georgia
AKAmadison BRONZE, Douglasville, Georgia
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Like all stories this one has a girl and a boy,
Her heart she thought he would destroy.

She desired to tell him how she felt,
And how he made her young heart melt.

‘This feeling I feel deep inside,
I hope in him I could confide.

My heart requires another half,
But I wish it could speak on my behalf.

As he looks upon me I feel enchanted,
Like my wish on a star finally granted.

If he were to declare his love to me,
Would I be able to agree?

I can’t explain why I seem unsure,
But all I want is to find a cure.

An ever after that would someday prevail,
Help me through this teenage fairytale.’



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on Aug. 8 2010 at 10:27 am
AKAmadison BRONZE, Douglasville, Georgia
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This poem was actually how I felt about someone. It's a bit more dramatic than my actual experince. I have never written a poem in this style before and I'm glad you liked it.

CoDy said...
on Mar. 11 2010 at 2:10 pm
Hey I like this poem. Its very well written and i enjoyed the story it told because it seemed so real. Just like reading a book but it flowed better with my own personal liking. Tell me, was this written on the basis of an actual expirence? Just out of curiousity. It was my pleasure to read your writting keep it up.