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An Idle Enemy

March 9, 2010
By gregeron91 SILVER, Salem, Alabama
gregeron91 SILVER, Salem, Alabama
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Favorite Quote:
I saw that my life was a vast glowing empty page and I could do anything I wanted.<br /> -Jack Kerouac


White Out, you mock me;
You evil Fluid.
You remind me of my Faults,
And how I will never be free
Of my imperfections.

The Bumps you leave
Cause me to cringe,
Only after my lofty Pen
Runs across the Scars
You left in Remembrance,
Of my flawed Writing.

I dream of the day
When your accursed
Container drys,
solid.

Until then, I will allow
Your cynical Smirks
As you stain my Work,
And my ashy Hands.


The author's comments:
I hope this dose not come off as being cheesey, because its not meant to be. This is something we all can relate to, no matter writer or not.

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on Jul. 10 2010 at 5:31 pm
smilebright BRONZE, Las Vegas, Nevada
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;Your only in trouble if you get caught&quot;- Aladdin

I love it! The way you refer to white out as a living being. Also i can totally relate to that. Please post comments on my work