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Who?.

April 8, 2010
amicrazyorisitjusteveryoneelse PLATINUM, Kula, Hawaii
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Favorite Quote:
"Everything you dream is real and everything real is a dream"


Nothing compares to what I feel

Of this girl to which my heart appeals


Every word she speaks is angelic

Love she said is older than a relic

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Laugh and live and dance and sing

Each and every one of us must always do these things


But can you guess who this poem’s about?

Each line has a key so don’t shout it out


No one has ever guessed my mystery girl
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Don’t unless you know don’t give it a whirl


Every time you guess and you get it wrong

Look back at this poem and sing it like a song


“Love, Live, Laugh.” Recite everything

The author's comments:
NB long time ago i liked her

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on May. 19 2010 at 1:26 am
amicrazyorisitjusteveryoneelse PLATINUM, Kula, Hawaii
48 articles 0 photos 198 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Everything you dream is real and everything real is a dream"

thanks:)   i appreciate it

k.james SILVER said...
on May. 12 2010 at 11:17 am
k.james SILVER, Whitby, Other
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Favorite Quote:
"Love without action is meaningless, action without love is irrelevant." -Deepak Chopra

VERY GOOD :)

on May. 7 2010 at 10:48 pm
amicrazyorisitjusteveryoneelse PLATINUM, Kula, Hawaii
48 articles 0 photos 198 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Everything you dream is real and everything real is a dream"

?? really?? i don't really like this one as much.. i wrote them for girls a long time ago  haha :P

on May. 6 2010 at 5:44 am
hxcRocker DIAMOND, Haiku, Hawaii
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Really like this one